A Sea of Tears

Long-suffering, at one time,
A door mat, some would say.
Too forgiving of a man
until true suffering began... 
the unforgiving kind.
Do not make promises to him
you cannot keep.
He hides himself on a mountaintop steep.
One more lie, one more betrayal,
one more slit in the cleave
of his heart
may push him from his rocky ledge,
may be the death of him.
He cries and cries until the earth floods,
a deep, adulterated sea around his lonesome home, 
from where he perches, he can never roam
or try to love again.
A tragic tale he has made his own prison -
walls of clouds dark and dim.
Oh, can you save this man of tears 
who never learned to swim?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Pinet Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 1:40 PM
You have an irrepressible talent that keeps shining through your words like a sparkling diamond adding to the depth of this piece. Emile. #7
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 4:44 AM
This for me a poem that I can interpret it in two ways.. :) i like the adulterated sea.. :) love the poetical devices you used here.. :)!//olive eloisa
Sirak Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 7:43 AM
Very powerful! The ending is perfection!
Wigley Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 2:55 AM
And they say that no man is an island. Sadly, sometimes they are. Marvellous write, Rhonda. Viv x
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 1:34 AM
I could identify with a lot of the lines in this impressive write Rhonda. I loved your ending too! 7
Yvonne Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 9:27 AM
Intense! A great write! Many layers to consider.
La France Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 9:01 AM
Rhonda, your writing is intense in this hauntingly somewhat sad poem, a perfect 7 rating and thanks for visiting my poem, thinking in . . .
Sathasivam Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 4:20 AM
Excellent. Well expressed poem. Enjoyed.. Tfs
Vaso Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 11:35 PM
I agree with Laura, when I read this, I just feel there is more to it, like an onion with many layers, beautiful ( no pun intended with tears and onions LOL )
Meade Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 10:31 PM
There is always hope . . . the sadness of this story is felt deep within my heart! Nicely done. 7
Lamoureux Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 7:47 AM
Wow, this is really really well expressed.
Leiser Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 11:15 PM
I feel there is another fascinating story b hind this most interesting poem. Creatively written, as usual, Rhonda :)
Williams Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 2:38 AM
WOW that was very deep and beautiful. Now I see that you do feel where I have been. huggggssssssssss
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