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A Scraping of Shovels

It is a sanctuary of hushed stillness here muted sounds of nature prevail a rustle of leaves, a scurrying of rodents flutterings of birds flying and chirping. Peaceful it may seem, and yet... I have dwelt here uneasily, year after year hard pressed to escape my confinement tormented by nightmares tragedy without resolution. A new day dawns, much like any other I become aware of strange, new sounds sounds I’ve not heard for a long while a scraping of shovels, scraping, digging digging and scraping up dirt full of hope. I tremble in anticipation for this moment this moment I have dreamt about in my eternal sleep..could this truly be the day of my release? Oh Lord, I can see the sunlight now for at long last, I‘ve been found justice has finally prevailed today...I’ve been set free! Written on 3/6/2019

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Date: 3/16/2019 10:48:00 AM
a very dark take on the theme Laura! Many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/16/2019 12:12:00 PM
Thanks, Jan! :)
Date: 3/16/2019 9:53:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Laura! Janice
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/16/2019 12:12:00 PM
Thank you, Janice! :)
Date: 3/16/2019 9:41:00 AM
Wow, Laura, a very troubled, yet intriguing, take on the theme combined with a metaphorical mystery.....well done
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/16/2019 10:14:00 AM
Thank you, John, for placing me in your challenging contest! I appreciate it.
Date: 3/7/2019 5:37:00 PM
Oooo... I like this! Very interesting take on this theme! :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/7/2019 6:12:00 PM
Thank you. P.S.! Somewhat sinister...been watching a lot of “Unsolved Mysteries” lately, lol! :)
Date: 3/6/2019 3:59:00 PM
ohh, empowering you from voices of the past... i find this remarkably designed, laura... keep the quill moist!... winning wishes and huggs
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/6/2019 5:59:00 PM
Thanks so much, Nette! Glad you liked this! :)
Date: 3/6/2019 3:37:00 PM
A delight to read for my first poem today Laura. You never disappoint! Lovely! xxoo : )
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/6/2019 3:42:00 PM
Thanks so much, Connie! Your kind comment made my day! :)

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