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A Scented Garden

That spring afternoon, a fully bloomed jasmine tree leaning on your way, you looked back and smiled at me then vanished at the turning. In my mind's canvas still now you,your jasmine smile..... a scented garden

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Josie Whitehead

Date: 5/17/2012 3:52:00 AM

This poem is, as the others said, a pleasant poem which you've painted with words - which is something I really love.

Terry O'Leary

Date: 5/11/2012 6:10:00 PM

Avery pleasant poem... Terry

Fabiyas M V

Date: 5/8/2012 10:20:00 PM

A sweet scene you have painted with words,Kash.Congratulations!Hope you are well.

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 5/6/2012 2:06:00 AM

Awesome and beautiful combination,Kash..Great work...Congratulations on your well deserved win ...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/4/2012 11:21:00 PM

(remind me of YOUR birthday again. Was it in October?) I need to write down my friends' birthdays because I want to remember so many of them.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/4/2012 11:20:00 PM

Kash, I am so happy to see you in top place. You really deserved it with this beauty!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/4/2012 6:35:00 PM

An arousing aroma. That's for sure! What a wonderful first place with this one! Congrats to you, Kashi! Great win! Gwendolenxu3r

Samia Ali Salama

Date: 5/4/2012 11:11:00 AM

Very lovely Kash! Congratulations ...Samia

Joann Grisetti

Date: 5/4/2012 10:15:00 AM

Simple and beautiful. Congratulations.

Dinda Minardi

Date: 5/4/2012 9:22:00 AM

Congraaaattttssss!!!! very beautiful :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/4/2012 8:23:00 AM

As if watching a breath-taking moment! Very beautiful dear Kash! Congratulations!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/4/2012 7:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in "Contest 174" Kash. Love, Carol

Joseph May

Date: 5/4/2012 5:54:00 AM

congrats on your win Kash

Chrysanthemum Flower

Date: 4/29/2012 7:30:00 AM

It's short and sweet. I like the line "In my mind's canvas still now you, your jasmine smile .....

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/11/2012 6:43:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this great work..Sara

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/10/2012 7:55:00 PM

This is so sweet. Congrats on your win, Kash! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/10/2012 12:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your super win in Russell's "A Mesh Of Forms" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/9/2012 7:15:00 PM

Very appealing write. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/9/2012 6:45:00 PM

Such a romantic, can't you find Ma a romantic man! Congrad's on your win Light & love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/9/2012 9:00:00 AM

congrats Kash on a superb win for this eloquent mesh of forms luv.. one brilliant composition .. with amazing imagery luv..

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/23/2012 6:03:00 AM

Breathtaking and romantic Kash, all the best for Russell's contest with this beauty :) Wilma

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/22/2012 4:41:00 PM

Like a poetic mirror, Kash! I had to look back twice and read this....it is as pretty as spring! Gwendolen

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/22/2012 3:10:00 PM

yayyy!..look again, kashi... picture! :)huggs!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/22/2012 2:53:00 PM

Great entry Kash..so good to hear from you! Light & Love

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 3/22/2012 2:37:00 PM

Hello Kash, I adore this one, it is so romantic, especially when you wrote "you looked back and smiled at me". Love the way you think Kash Lovely Lov, Shar