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A Scented Garden

That spring afternoon,
a fully bloomed jasmine tree
leaning on your way,
you looked back and smiled at me
then vanished at the turning.



In my mind's canvas
still now you,your jasmine smile.....
a scented garden

Copyright © Kash Poet | Year Posted 2012

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Josie Whitehead Date: 5/17/2012 3:52:00 AM This poem is, as the others said, a pleasant poem which you've painted with words - which is something I really love. Login to Reply

Terry O'Leary Date: 5/11/2012 6:10:00 PM Avery pleasant poem... Terry Login to Reply

Fabiyas M V Date: 5/8/2012 10:20:00 PM A sweet scene you have painted with words,Kash.Congratulations!Hope you are well. Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 5/6/2012 2:06:00 AM Awesome and beautiful combination,Kash..Great work...Congratulations on your well deserved win ... Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/4/2012 11:21:00 PM (remind me of YOUR birthday again. Was it in October?) I need to write down my friends' birthdays because I want to remember so many of them. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/4/2012 11:20:00 PM Kash, I am so happy to see you in top place. You really deserved it with this beauty! Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 5/4/2012 6:35:00 PM An arousing aroma. That's for sure! What a wonderful first place with this one! Congrats to you, Kashi! Great win! Gwendolenxu3r Login to Reply

Samia Ali Salama Date: 5/4/2012 11:11:00 AM Very lovely Kash! Congratulations ...Samia Login to Reply

Joann Grisetti Date: 5/4/2012 10:15:00 AM Simple and beautiful. Congratulations. Login to Reply

Dinda Minardi Date: 5/4/2012 9:22:00 AM Congraaaattttssss!!!! very beautiful :) Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 5/4/2012 8:23:00 AM As if watching a breath-taking moment! Very beautiful dear Kash! Congratulations! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/4/2012 7:03:00 AM Congratulations on your placement in "Contest 174" Kash. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 5/4/2012 5:54:00 AM congrats on your win Kash Login to Reply

Chrysanthemum Flower Date: 4/29/2012 7:30:00 AM It's short and sweet. I like the line "In my mind's canvas still now you, your jasmine smile ..... Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/11/2012 6:43:00 PM Congrats on your win with this great work..Sara Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 4/10/2012 7:55:00 PM This is so sweet. Congrats on your win, Kash! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/10/2012 12:26:00 PM Congratulations on your super win in Russell's "A Mesh Of Forms" contest Kash. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 4/9/2012 7:15:00 PM Very appealing write. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 4/9/2012 6:45:00 PM Such a romantic, can't you find Ma a romantic man! Congrad's on your win Light & love Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/9/2012 9:00:00 AM congrats Kash on a superb win for this eloquent mesh of forms luv.. one brilliant composition .. with amazing imagery luv.. Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 3/23/2012 6:03:00 AM Breathtaking and romantic Kash, all the best for Russell's contest with this beauty :) Wilma Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 3/22/2012 4:41:00 PM Like a poetic mirror, Kash! I had to look back twice and read this....it is as pretty as spring! Gwendolen Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/22/2012 3:10:00 PM yayyy!..look again, kashi... picture! :)huggs! Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 3/22/2012 2:53:00 PM Great entry Kash..so good to hear from you! Light & Love Login to Reply

Sharon Ruebel Date: 3/22/2012 2:37:00 PM Hello Kash, I adore this one, it is so romantic, especially when you wrote "you looked back and smiled at me". Love the way you think Kash Lovely Lov, Shar Login to Reply

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