Andrea Dietrich Poet Footle

A Scene Serene - 1472

A scene 
serene

clear stream
day’s dream

a tree
I see

I sit
by it

sun shines
on vines

birds fly
sky high

I hear
sounds near

bird’s tweet
so sweet

thicket’s 
crickets

they trill
goodwill

all this
brings bliss

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Paige Hind May 16, 2026 at 6:43 PM I love footles. You did this one great!! <3

Valsa George May 16, 2026 at 3:57 AM This is so beautiful dear Andrea. Wish you all the Best. Andrea Dietrich May 16, 2026 at 2:33 PM Thanks so much

Joanna Daniel May 16, 2026 at 2:27 AM Wow! Brilliant! I never thought anyone could write such meaningful poetry in footle form.. Lovely again:) Andrea Dietrich May 16, 2026 at 2:33 PM So nice if you to say

Bj Legros Kelley May 16, 2026 at 12:32 AM Sweet and serene, lovely poem Andrea! <3 Andrea Dietrich May 16, 2026 at 2:33 PM Thanks!

Anne Winter May 15, 2026 at 9:20 PM Dear Andrea, I love this poem! Reading it felt like a nostalgic summer's day. Best, Anne Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2026 at 9:48 PM Thanks so much

Joseph P. DiMino May 15, 2026 at 4:17 PM All is right with the world. Beautiful. Very creative. Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2026 at 9:48 PM Thanks, Joe

John Loving Iii May 15, 2026 at 3:32 PM That's how i start each line.

JC Brul May 15, 2026 at 2:10 PM So much loveliness in few words. CONGRATULATIONS dear Andie.. ^___^ JCB Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2026 at 9:48 PM Thank you

Ts Poetry May 15, 2026 at 12:03 PM So sweet...this treat Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2026 at 9:48 PM Thank you

I Am Anaya May 15, 2026 at 8:49 AM These were a perfect set of Brian's Footle Formula, knew he'd like. Congratulations Andrea! Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2026 at 9:50 PM Thanks, Anaya

Tom Cunningham May 15, 2026 at 6:55 AM Great string of footless Andrea, hope you're keeping well.. Tom Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2026 at 9:50 PM Thanks, Tom

Ink Empress May 15, 2026 at 6:30 AM I love thickets crickets the most here sweet Andrea! Queen of footles! Once again, youv nailed it! You rhyme in your sleep too i think, as you are so good with these! Pleasure reading Sending you light always Best wishes Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2026 at 9:49 PM That was my favorite too on the crickets. Thanks, Ink

Howard Kerr May 15, 2026 at 1:38 AM This superb suite of footles gets Howard’s magic wand weave for a deserved placement in whatever contest of your choice. Good luck H Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2026 at 9:50 PM Thanks, Howard