A Scarlet Shroud

Cotton candy pinks and marshmallow whites flaunt iridescent sheens buffed by the sun. And colored clouds, lined with mother-of-pearl, hang in the sky, like a prize fairly won. Darkness gathers in tattered strands of grey, strewn across a sky of indigo blue. And stars glitter as a dying sun shrinks, to a crimson ball, with a scarlet hue. Ebony fingers scratch at the skyline; like inky tentacles grasping for light. And as camouflaged trees morph into black; silhouetted abstracts merge in the night. Liquid amber burns atop umber waves, while igniting frothy, foamy whitecaps. And golden moonbeams gild gleaming waters, as cascading breakers, crash and collapse. Playful breezes tickle leaves on the trees, sending laughter tumbling down to the ground. And as Sol dies, wrapped in a scarlet shroud, time's suspended: and tranquility's found.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 1:40 PM
Beautiful imagery, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 7:04 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Kinch  Avatar
April 2, 2017 at 1:24 PM
Fabulous vocabulary and imagery, a great write Emile.
Pinet Avatar
April 2, 2017 at 1:37 PM
Thank you so much Elizabeth, for this vote of confidence and encouragement. I truly appreciate it, Emile.
Kamble Avatar
April 2, 2017 at 7:01 AM
Powerful imagery... So vivid!! Good write :) shubham
Pinet Avatar
April 2, 2017 at 9:48 AM
Thanks Shubham, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 10:43 PM
An awe inspiring portrait of nature. A Fave Emile! 7 ; )
Pinet Avatar
April 2, 2017 at 9:44 AM
Thanks so much Connie, your comments are always welcome and appreciated, Emile.
Roper Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 9:46 PM
Beautiful imagery +10
Pinet Avatar
April 2, 2017 at 9:47 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Williams Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 6:35 PM
I meant images
Williams Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 6:32 PM
The visual imagers that your words convey are just outstanding Emile. 7+
Pinet Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 7:36 PM
Thanks so much Maria, your comments are always welcome and appreciated, Emile.
Pasky Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 4:14 PM
Exceptionally vivid imagery. The continuous use of change of color in particular. Very well written.
Pinet Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 7:34 PM
Thanks Forrest, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
May Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 3:11 PM
Beautiful write ...A7
Pinet Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 3:54 PM
Thanks Joseph, I appreciate your visit, Emile.
Sands Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 12:34 PM
Wow Emile. This is an amazing poem! I love all the descriptions in your lines. And even the impact of laughter tumbling down to the sand. Very well written. The photo above is similar to some paintings I have done. Thanks for sharing all this with us :) A favorite !
Pinet Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 12:44 PM
Thank you so much Heidi, for this vote of confidence and encouragement. I truly appreciate it, Emile.
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