A Saving Rose

Every heart needs

A saving rose

Every dreamer dreams 

To achieve his goals

Every lover cries

One day love must end

Every prayer of faith

Closer to GOD and friend

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Date: 5/24/2020 8:54:00 AM
Touching sentiment, well crafted flow. Brief but poignant message.
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Date: 3/25/2020 2:20:00 PM
Hi Arturo, the rose within your heart is singing. This is such a wonderful write. Your gentle words gently caress the heart and make the soul sing. beautiful dreamers. A beautiful canvas painted. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 3/20/2020 11:09:00 PM
Gorgeous my friend. Your romantic heart is showing.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/21/2020 6:47:00 AM
Thanks Caren...Mr. Dreamer I suppose...
Date: 3/20/2020 9:07:00 PM
such a beautiful write Arturo, so very true... hugs and blessings :)
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/21/2020 6:44:00 AM
Thank you Sandra...a lovely weekend to you...
Date: 3/19/2020 4:46:00 PM
Beautiful and uplifting. May God's blessings be with you. love phyl
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/20/2020 7:23:00 AM
Lovely Phyllis...Nice to see you here...Thanks my friend
Date: 3/18/2020 10:29:00 AM
Well said, Arturo, every though of Him and every prayer brings us closer to Him.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/18/2020 6:12:00 PM
Somehow it's makes sense, coming round the bend of life...wish I had accepted it earlier...the bruises would have been less where it really hurts
Date: 3/17/2020 4:03:00 PM
A very powerful poem in very few words! Love every sentence! Well done
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/17/2020 4:43:00 PM
So glad to hear...we all need a saving rose
Date: 3/16/2020 7:11:00 PM
Much to ponder in just a few lines... Why does love have to die?! Deep thoughts. Thanks, Arturo! :) gw
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/16/2020 7:24:00 PM
Well. not literally die...but for us physically it dies...although memories and feelings are remembered...Love has ENDED and it's a subtle kind of love compared to what we knew before....my point of view
Date: 3/15/2020 11:45:00 PM
Thanks for your visit. ;0)
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/16/2020 11:38:00 AM
My pleasure Richard...
Date: 3/15/2020 10:52:00 PM
I loved both your video and the timeless message of your beautiful poem, Arturo. I also love the title.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/16/2020 11:37:00 AM
Thank YOU Evelyn...Only the beautiful recognizes beauty...and that you are...
Date: 3/15/2020 10:46:00 PM
Draw closer to God, and He draws closer to you. Follow Him and He will take care of you. This is so beautiful and uplifting. My heart is smiling. :) Brandy
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/16/2020 11:35:00 AM
Thank you Brandy...Keep smiling it makes you twice as beautiful
Date: 3/15/2020 10:04:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Thanks likewise for your comments.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/16/2020 11:33:00 AM
Thanks for the blessing ...I need ALL
Date: 3/15/2020 1:49:00 PM
Just beautiful!
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/16/2020 11:33:00 AM
Maybe just as beautiful as YOU...Thanks my friend
Date: 3/15/2020 7:29:00 AM
Beautiful. Love and prayers for you, Gina
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/15/2020 10:15:00 AM
Thanks Gina...without those good vibes spreading...life would be worthless
Date: 3/13/2020 10:35:00 AM
Concise and lovely--conveys a sweet message! Janice
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/13/2020 11:05:00 AM
Thanks Janice...A lovely weekend to YOU
Date: 3/13/2020 8:50:00 AM
This is perfect. Blessings Rick
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/13/2020 11:02:00 AM
Thanks Rick...All the best
Date: 3/13/2020 7:14:00 AM
Uplifting beautiful poem dear, Arturo!
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/13/2020 11:02:00 AM
Thanks D... a lovely weekend to YOU
Date: 3/12/2020 5:40:00 PM
I am glad that prayer brings us closer to God and to each other. In these most difficult times. Its such a comfort. Thank you for sharing. Arturo. xo
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/13/2020 3:11:00 AM
Prayer is unbelievably...it opens a door to where we're all One...This is a wake up call...for the only constant is change, at any stage or in any phase...we must see beyond our differences...to grow... 'cause we're going to go...
Date: 3/12/2020 9:57:00 AM
So lovely, my friend!
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/13/2020 2:55:00 AM
Thank you Kim...
Date: 3/11/2020 11:43:00 AM
Hi Arturo, a brilliant poem and an awesome picture. Your write reads like a prayer - exceptional poetry. Blessings, Jennifer
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/11/2020 6:12:00 PM
Hi Jennifer...Thanks my friend...your comment gives me courage...
Date: 3/11/2020 10:27:00 AM
Arturo, absolutely beautiful and the video is divine _ Constance
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/11/2020 5:59:00 PM
A saving rose to you too...thanks Dear Heart
Date: 3/11/2020 7:07:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/11/2020 10:01:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise...a saving rose for you...
Date: 3/11/2020 7:01:00 AM
Beautifully said, Arturo: Every heart needs A saving rose..
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/11/2020 10:00:00 AM
I do...how'bout you...Thanks Vijay
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