A Sam N Fish Story

Sam N. Fish fell in love with a mermaid At the wedding her gills started to fade After a cup of water She said, I guess we 'ought-er' Rent a submarine in the everglades... Sam N. quickly looked into the matter Saw that his bank book had to be fatter Sam bought some blue-chip stocks Then he got a huge shock Market was underwater ~ so sad, sir

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/13/2020 4:53:00 PM

Ooh, well penned with great word-play. Clever Gershon!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2020 6:16:00 PM

Thanks for the spirited comment, M.L! Cheers without Beers, Gershon

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/13/2020 11:58:00 AM

What a clever play on words: Sam N and sammon. Had to laugh at the thought of a submarine in the Everglades where the water is shallow. Unfortunately, stocks are going crazy now. If we beat the pandemic, maybe they'll steady. Enjoyed your limerick, Gershon! Hugs, Carolyn

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2020 6:15:00 PM

Ha, ha! As long as my stocks 'go crazy,' I'll laugh all the way to the cashier's window... Thanks, Carolyn! :) gw

Jenish Somadas

Date: 8/12/2020 10:13:00 PM

lol... Hilarious Limerick.. Exquisite humour.. Loved your write Gershon..

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/13/2020 6:14:00 PM

'Exquisite humor,' you say?! -- Now I feel like a real writer! Thanks, Jenish!