A Sailing I Didn'T Go

I had won a sponsorship on a sailing ship,
I was ecstatic it was right up my street.
Trouble is, I was to go in hospital.
But I was promised I would be fit, to join the fleet.

I woke up from my surgery
It was over and I wanted time to go faster,
My lifetime trip, I could almost see,
But I was in bed now, and covered in plaster.

For my trip, I waited what seemed an age
Patience, not being my best virtue.
A sailing ship to learn how to sail, 
‘You can go.’ Said the surgeon 
‘That I promise you.’ 

Don’t worry you will be up and about
This is what the operation is for.
I promise you will be able to go
Even though, it will still be a bit sore.

They put special lamps on to dry the cast; 
I wanted to know how long this plaster will last.
He looked at me and in a voice devoid of feeling;
‘Oh six weeks is needed to repair the bones.’
I cried, and raised my eyes to the ceiling.

‘Well how can I go on a sailing ship? I cried,
 I felt my heart was breaking fast.
‘I need to unfurl sails and be able to climb the mast
How am I now, to do this, and sail the ocean blue? 
That is the main question that I am asking you.’

‘My job is to make you well;
And necessary if I find it,
I will plaster you from head to foot,
Never mind just your foot and hip.’

‘I say you can go, but up to me, it may not be.
But that’s not my problem, really - in all reality.’
He lied to me to get me in hospital, 
My trip was duly cancelled.
I was thirteen years old at the time,
And on this my feelings rankled.

They sent me a photograph of all those on the ship,
It was supposed to make me feel good;
I took it badly at the time,
But then I think any thirteen - year old would.

They may as well have slapped me in the face
As compensation, I thought it a disgrace.

A year passed, I won again, and this time I could go.
I won the “Best Sailor Cup” award,
And I still have it to show.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Esquire Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 9:08 AM
Dear Mandy, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit.Yea Doctors lie all the time I am glad YOU had a second chance and YOU won the award and Congratulations on YOUR 1st place Win in Carol's Contest LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry
Horsman Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 5:20 AM
another wonderful saga in to your childhood, Mandy, you've had it rough sometimes? yet here you are with this ability to captivate.
Freeman Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 6:22 PM
A beautiful final outcome, Mandy at any rate. Congratulations on your special first place. Agape, Moses
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 2, 2011 at 1:13 AM
Thanks John, x
Stinson Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 5:49 PM
Congratulations on your placing with the brilliant poem.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 2, 2011 at 1:14 AM
Thank you expecially for sayin it was brilliant. over the top but nice to read.x
Arno Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 5:07 PM
Congratulations on your win :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 2, 2011 at 1:15 AM
Thanks x
Macfarlane Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 4:24 PM
Determination made you win.....may it always! Congrats on you win. Hugs CC
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 2, 2011 at 1:15 AM
Thanks, i must admit deternination has had too .x
Quigley Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 8:46 AM
Good things come to those who wait, right Mandy? Glad you got the second chance .Congratulations on your win in the Letdown contest
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 8:58 AM
Thanks bob x
Johnson Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 8:45 AM
Very disappointing for a child, especially if they lied and kept your hopes up. Glad it all worked out the next year. Love, Joyce
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 8:59 AM
Thanks Joyce it worked to a point I was taken off at Alderney and hospitalized there, but i enjoyed it whie it lasted.x
Brown Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 6:18 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Mandy. You all left a piece of yourselves on this contest page. It was so very hard to judge. I am asking you all to read and comment on all the winners here. You will go away seeing into the hearts of all the winners. This was a very emotional contest for me. Thank you all for supporting this contest. Love and blessing to you all, Carol
Lane Avatar
November 19, 2011 at 6:43 AM
Well done, Both the poem and the cup. Tony
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