A Sad Duck Eleanor Rigby

Eleanor Rigby, picks up the rice
In the church where a wedding has been
Lives in a dream
Waits at the window, wearing the face
That she keeps in a jar by the door
Who is it for
All the lonely people
Where do they all come from?
All the lonely people
Where do they all belong?

                             Eleanor Rigby
                             Lyrics by Paul McCartney of Beatle’s fame

A SAD DUCK

her palm pale, a shallow nest for one —
breadcrumbs.

so called old maid, the librarian-dreams —
bluebirds and fancy bows, not in hers.

a square frame-mask; crows look in the window.
the crone-paste fills in the tracks, nothing more.

an echo in her reflection — eternity squared.
she clings to the lonely door — 

she’s left in a basket next to the hermitage.
his lips never moved; removed.

cue the sandstorm:

the lyrics in delirium, the callus-rice in the air.
she promised the voice on the phone, she would come,
and here she was —
alone.

an orphan, by ordinance of a puppy basket.
the yelp for something to live for.
fed and wrapped, kissed twice,
on the forehead —
once when she arrived. . .
again when she left.

the whipped cream in the jar —
commercial-bling,

makes her complexion even
— a sad duck.

she perks up
as she hears her name —
“the lonely dame...”

the mania frenzies around her.
all the same,
no one sees her face,
terrified blinks.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lamoureux Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 7:22 PM
I enjoyed giving it a second read. So well done.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 8:39 PM
Thank you, Richard! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
August 27, 2019 at 5:34 PM
This is one of my favourites so far. Best of luck in the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2019 at 5:36 PM
Thanks so much, Richard!!
Krutsinger Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 6:10 PM
I think you just took all the gold in this contest, I am going back for a second read. A FAV but I know I have missed some of it for it is deep.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 6:16 PM
Thanks so much! xx
Warrior Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 8:20 PM
Hey Kimmy!...nicely done my friend...ready for a win...^WW^ :o)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 8:21 PM
Thank you, my friend!
B. Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 4:59 PM
Your interpretation of Eleanor Rigby, is amazing, Kim.. I enjoyed this! So wonderful.. Have a blessed day..
Rodrigues Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 5:49 PM
Thank you, Robertina!
Pandit Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 4:52 PM
I like your interpretation of the contest theme..and the metaphoric write on Eleanor Rigby..kudos for the imagination, Kim..all the best for a win.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 4:53 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
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