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Decrepit Poetry Contest, Sponsored by Constance La France. Date written: 06/07/2025

A Sad, Decrepit Sight

          looking 
         worse for wear
   at the mercy 
of winter's harsh elements.
          a stray dog,
                    sad of eyes,
clothed in all black 
             to match her mood.
emaciated and weather-beaten;

a labrador retriever 
        with her tail 
tucked behind her hind legs
        softly whimpering 
                    shivering.
oh, you poor thing...
how far is your home?
       scared 
             untrusting 
                  of strangers; 
 perennially running 
             from rescue.

with a looped leash,
I approach, again....
she takes a step back 
I come closer...closer....closer...
she turns 
      and sprints away.

I won't give up,
           I'll do my best...
to help bring you in...
      from the cold.

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David Crandall June 16, 2025 at 7:15 PM Poor thing - nice poem Edward Ibeh June 17, 2025 at 8:17 AM Thank you so much, David:-)

Valsa George June 15, 2025 at 6:07 AM You are empathetic to fellow beings and animals alike. Love the expression of intimate feelings of compassion. Hearty Congratulations on your win dear Edward. Edward Ibeh June 17, 2025 at 8:17 AM Thank you very much, Valsa:-)

Karen Jones June 15, 2025 at 5:17 AM Congratulations on your win and happy Father’s Day if you celebrate! Edward Ibeh June 17, 2025 at 8:14 AM Thank you very much, Karen:-)

Subimal Sinha-Roy June 10, 2025 at 11:14 PM Congratulations, Edward on your win with a compassionate poem. Edward Ibeh June 11, 2025 at 2:17 AM Thank you very much, Subimal:-)

Saivi Kurian June 10, 2025 at 8:45 PM Hello Edward, Your poem is fantastic! Congratulations on your win. Edward Ibeh June 11, 2025 at 2:16 AM Thank you so much, Saivi:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen June 10, 2025 at 11:42 AM - Congratulations on your win in the contest ... a lovely poem ... with deep feelings, Edward :) - hugs Edward Ibeh June 11, 2025 at 2:15 AM Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)

Paula Goldsmith June 10, 2025 at 11:12 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story again. Have a blessed day with your win............. Edward Ibeh June 11, 2025 at 2:15 AM Thanks again, Paula!

Paula Goldsmith June 7, 2025 at 10:50 AM I think this is a wonderful write/story to read. Great Ending... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful weekend writing away......... Edward Ibeh June 7, 2025 at 3:16 PM Thank you, Paula:-) Good luck to you, too.

Rob Carmack June 7, 2025 at 10:24 AM Impactful. I hope it places. Edward Ibeh June 7, 2025 at 10:27 AM Thank you very much, Rob:-)

Kim Rodrigues June 7, 2025 at 8:48 AM Aw…she needs a rescuer but her fear of strangers is evident. Great write with a big heart! Edward Ibeh June 7, 2025 at 10:27 AM Thank you very much, Kim:-)