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Decrepit Poetry Contest, Sponsored by Constance La France. Date written: 06/07/2025

looking worse for wear at the mercy of winter's harsh elements. a stray dog, sad of eyes, clothed in all black to match her mood. emaciated and weather-beaten; a labrador retriever with her tail tucked behind her hind legs softly whimpering shivering. oh, you poor thing... how far is your home? scared untrusting of strangers; perennially running from rescue. with a looped leash, I approach, again.... she takes a step back I come closer...closer....closer... she turns and sprints away. I won't give up, I'll do my best... to help bring you in... from the cold.

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Date: 6/7/2025 2:10:00 PM
Awww nice one Ed. AIAIO! Ha. Jus kiddin
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/7/2025 3:13:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by, Tom:-)
Date: 6/7/2025 10:50:00 AM
I think this is a wonderful write/story to read. Great Ending... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful weekend writing away.........
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/7/2025 3:16:00 PM
Thank you, Paula:-) Good luck to you, too.
Date: 6/7/2025 10:24:00 AM
Impactful. I hope it places.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/7/2025 10:27:00 AM
Thank you very much, Rob:-)
Date: 6/7/2025 8:48:00 AM
Aw…she needs a rescuer but her fear of strangers is evident. Great write with a big heart!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/7/2025 10:27:00 AM
Thank you very much, Kim:-)

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