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Decrepit Poetry Contest, Sponsored by Constance La France. Date written: 06/07/2025


          looking 
         worse for wear
   at the mercy 
of winter's harsh elements.
          a stray dog,
                    sad of eyes,
clothed in all black 
             to match her mood.
emaciated and weather-beaten;

a labrador retriever 
        with her tail 
tucked behind her hind legs
        softly whimpering 
                    shivering.
oh, you poor thing...
how far is your home?
       scared 
             untrusting 
                  of strangers; 
 perennially running 
             from rescue.

with a looped leash,
I approach, again....
she takes a step back 
I come closer...closer....closer...
she turns 
      and sprints away.

I won't give up,
           I'll do my best...
to help bring you in...
      from the cold.


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Date: 6/16/2025 7:15:00 PM
Poor thing - nice poem
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/17/2025 8:17:00 AM
Thank you so much, David:-)
Date: 6/15/2025 6:07:00 AM
You are empathetic to fellow beings and animals alike. Love the expression of intimate feelings of compassion. Hearty Congratulations on your win dear Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/17/2025 8:17:00 AM
Thank you very much, Valsa:-)
Date: 6/15/2025 5:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and happy Father’s Day if you celebrate!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/17/2025 8:14:00 AM
Thank you very much, Karen:-)
Date: 6/10/2025 11:14:00 PM
Congratulations, Edward on your win with a compassionate poem.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/11/2025 2:17:00 AM
Thank you very much, Subimal:-)
Date: 6/10/2025 8:45:00 PM
Hello Edward, Your poem is fantastic! Congratulations on your win.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/11/2025 2:16:00 AM
Thank you so much, Saivi:-)
Date: 6/10/2025 11:42:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest ... a lovely poem ... with deep feelings, Edward :) - hugs
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/11/2025 2:15:00 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)
Date: 6/10/2025 11:12:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story again. Have a blessed day with your win.............
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/11/2025 2:15:00 AM
Thanks again, Paula!
Date: 6/7/2025 2:10:00 PM
Awww nice one Ed. AIAIO! Ha. Jus kiddin
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/7/2025 3:13:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by, Tom:-)
Date: 6/7/2025 10:50:00 AM
I think this is a wonderful write/story to read. Great Ending... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful weekend writing away.........
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/7/2025 3:16:00 PM
Thank you, Paula:-) Good luck to you, too.
Date: 6/7/2025 10:24:00 AM
Impactful. I hope it places.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/7/2025 10:27:00 AM
Thank you very much, Rob:-)
Date: 6/7/2025 8:48:00 AM
Aw…she needs a rescuer but her fear of strangers is evident. Great write with a big heart!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/7/2025 10:27:00 AM
Thank you very much, Kim:-)

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