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Third Stanza added 26 December 2024

Placed first in I Form- Imagism Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Constance La France

 

 

“The sacred lake also called Ganga Talao represents the mighty Ganges river of India.” Mauritiusinsideout.com>grand-bassin-mauritius A Sacred Lake In the midst of a tropical forest The mouth of a long extinct volcano Surrounded by hills not so high Bordered by lush trees and bushes Is the seat of sparkling waters That undulate in little waves In direction of the prevailing winds, Reflect the azure blue of the clear sky The bright rays of the sun during the day And white shines of stars and the moon at night. Before men had set their eyes on the lake Angels danced on the shore of the waters To the tunes of the breeze on moonlight nights; When a dream revealed the sight to a soul And slim pathways were threaded to the lake Angels no more plied to the sacred site, But thousands of men flocked to the spot for prayers And on the eve of Maha Shivratri Hundreds of thousands of pilgrims tread to the lake To source sacred water to pour on Lord Shiva. All year round, tourists converge to the lake To stroll around this sacred site Charm their eyes with its unique tapestry And snap shots of its picturesque beauty To relish as memento of their trip And cherish as a divine work of art Legated to this tropical island By the graceful divinity Who dropped a piece of paradise In midst of the Indian Ocean.

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Date: 10/1/2024 6:30:00 AM
Krish, congratulations on your win in my Imagism contest, beautifully penned, I love the image and quote, Constance
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Date: 9/26/2024 12:09:00 PM
Hello Krishnanand, this is a beautiful poem. i felt like I was there. My fav. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/27/2024 10:09:00 AM
Hello Krishnanand, I am glad I made your day bright The only way i could visit your area is if I won the lottery. Enjoy your weekend Blessings my friend. Ddarlene/,
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 9/26/2024 11:21:00 PM
Thanks a lot my friend for visiting my page and for your positive comments on the above poem. You have really made my day. You are welcome to visit our paradise island, Mauritius and the sacred lake of Grand Bassin. Wish you a pleasant day and upcoming weekend. Krishnanand

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