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A Rush of Emotions

She sat beside the waterfall
where gushing thoughts cascade,
like tears that flowed along her cheeks,
her heart set to invade.

He left alone for pastures new.
A scribbled note in haste
he wrote then fled, as cowards do,
her heart a barren waste.

A lightning bolt out of the blue
that pierced her heart; she bled.
And even now the ache still hurts;
her feeble wings unspread.
 
She dared not heed the tumbling sound
as water crashed on rocks.
How fit to let death end the pain!
She started down the walk.

But just before the water’s edge
a voice called out, “Be Ware!
The road you walk is treacherous;
for God’s sake, stand right there!”

He turned her round, and saw her face
spill tears upon her gown.
He whispered in her windswept hair
“One misstep and you’ll drown.”

“Please, let me go, you do not know
what burns here in my breast.
I need to douse these flames and find
my sweet eternal rest.”

She struggled then against his arms,
the longed for end so near,
and yet he held with all his might,
spoke words to still her fear.

And when all limp she leaned on him,
this man she did not know,
he soothed her as he said these words:
“I will not let you go.”

Drained of resolve she let him lead
from rock to lush verdure;
as reassurance kindled trust 
his hand was firm, secure.

They sat beneath a shady tree.
Engrossed, they talked at length,
and in the process she revealed
his presence gave her strength.

He held her hands, looked in her eyes,
his heart worn on his sleeve
as they agreed to meet again
before she had to leave.
 
She touched his face, with gentle grace,
leaned in to kiss his cheek;
her lips just trembled there a while
enough to make him weak.

“You’ve saved my life, and now I owe
the greatest debt to you.
When next we meet, after we greet,
I’ll give you what’s your due.”

He smiled into her upturned eyes
and said these simple words:
“I’ve been repaid with sweetest kiss
my heart and soul you’ve stirred.

We’ll meet again, and when we do
you will forget the past
for then, my dear, I’ll make a vow
of love that’s sure to last.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 8/1/2023 6:12:00 PM
It was a long story but worth reading. You could feel the pain and the hope that arrived. But for me there would be no next time. It's now or never.
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Date: 12/10/2020 7:53:00 PM
Fantastic!!! I just found you and so enjoyed this exquisite poem. Congratulations to you and Paul on a fantastic read.
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Date: 3/31/2020 3:56:00 PM
Well done Eileen and Paul, an amazing piece of writing with such good rhyme and flow throughout. Hope you're both well, keep healthy too, Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 12/16/2019 11:18:00 AM
I like the metaphors here the sense of emotion what I tried to achieve on two old poems I wrote sensual awakening and kiss of life enjoyed the read especially verse 2 xx david scott
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Date: 11/6/2019 9:30:00 PM
Eileen and Paul, your poem is amazing. Spellbinding emotions of love and kindness, a wonderful write. Hugs
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Date: 10/28/2019 5:29:00 AM
I had commented on Paul's and thought I did on yours I'm so sorry I didn't! This was so amazing it brought a tear to my eyes and I felt it to my core! Amazing both of you! Loved it and a fav!;)
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Date: 10/27/2019 9:09:00 AM
The readers' reaction to our poem is very encouraging, Eileen. It's always a joy to mix ink with you; it comes natural. Thank you for sharing your time and talent with me. Big hugs ~ paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/27/2019 12:05:00 PM
The pleasure is ALL mine! Believe me! I love writing with you, Paul. You're right! It never feels forced. Thank you for encouraging me to keep on writing.
Date: 10/22/2019 2:54:00 PM
Thanks for your visit Eileen. I hope you are well. Hugs Rick.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/25/2019 2:36:00 PM
I'm well, dear. Thanks for visiting. :) Hugs
Date: 10/20/2019 1:51:00 AM
A Wonderful classic poem, truly a master read.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/25/2019 2:32:00 PM
Thanks ever so much, Harry. Good to have a visit from you.
Date: 10/14/2019 8:22:00 AM
Another hi and a hug.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/22/2019 1:54:00 PM
:) :) :) :)
Date: 10/9/2019 11:20:00 AM
Wonderful story had been penned....I gasped a while....
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/22/2019 1:52:00 PM
Oh...that's a lovely response. :) I'm glad you liked this piece.
Date: 10/8/2019 6:34:00 PM
What a collaboration!!! It keep my attention for the next line.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/22/2019 1:48:00 PM
Thank you for the visit. Paul and I have over 10 collaborations to date. :)
Date: 10/7/2019 6:46:00 AM
Dropping by with a hug and a hello.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/22/2019 1:47:00 PM
Hugs and hellos are always appreciated. :)
Date: 10/1/2019 6:42:00 AM
I’m glad Paul is encouraging you. Hugs Rick.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/22/2019 1:44:00 PM
Yes, he's a wonderful friend. Collman collaborations do well. :) Thanks for the visit.
Date: 10/1/2019 3:18:00 AM
Ah, nothing but utter beauty in every word, congrats, you both penned a splendid poem of love.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/22/2019 1:44:00 PM
Thanks for the visit! Much appreciated.
Date: 9/27/2019 8:13:00 AM
This is breathtaking Eileen and Paul. I was mesmerized from start to finish. Hugs Rick.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/1/2019 2:05:00 AM
Mesmerized is oh so good! :) Thanks, Rick. I'm glad you found this piece to your liking. That makes me glad. Paul is a dream to work with. The words flow easily. He's encouraging me to get back to writing.
Date: 9/26/2019 2:49:00 PM
SO SO good to see you come back with a most marvelous romantic collaboration with our wonderful friend Paul:-) Bravo to you both:-) hugs Jan xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/1/2019 2:01:00 AM
Thanks, sweetie. He is a dear, isn't he? Thanks for your visit and lovely words. I will be by to visit you soon. Seems I'm always running behind. Bless you. :) XO
Date: 9/26/2019 8:31:00 AM
Beautifully done both of you. This piece is so seamless that I had no idea it was a collaboration until I red your notes at the end. Beautifully done. I wonderful story of love lost and love found.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/1/2019 1:58:00 AM
Thanks, Chris. I'm glad about the seamlessness you mentioned. Working with Paul really inspires me. He is a joy to collab with. Thanks for your lovely visit.
Date: 9/26/2019 3:50:00 AM
This is such a grand tale in a poem that is truly a gem. It's a worthy write and read. Blessings to you always
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/1/2019 1:56:00 AM
Thanks, Regina. You are always kind with your comments. I appreciate that. :) It is a pleasure working with Paul. Somehow things just flow without too much of an effort what we collab. I'm glad it was to your liking.
Date: 9/26/2019 2:48:00 AM
Hi Eileen, First of all, I know I will be amazed and mesmerised. I said that because I haven't read your poem yet. Let's get to it. Wait! I'm glad you're back posting again. I missed you. Wow! You and Paul wrote such an epic love story ( you two always did write well together). I enjoyed it from start to finish. Well done to you both! Off to read it again. Have a fantastic day my friend:-) Alexis
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/1/2019 1:53:00 AM
You have such a wonderful reaction, Alexis. I want to thank you from the bottom of my heart for your caring and loving words. :) I'm trying to get back into the game here, but life has been difficult lately. I don't seem to have as much time. I will pass by to read you soon. Hugs!!!
Date: 9/26/2019 2:05:00 AM
A touching poignant piece, very moving indeed--Love the imagery you've added ~ Aloha always William
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/1/2019 1:26:00 AM
Thanks, William. I appreciate the visit an kind words. :)
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