A Rural Tragedy

Act 1: Scene 1:  (As the curtain opens, we see the bulky frame of Farmer George. He paces 
the worn floor of his large open kitchen. He has just come in from harvesting his crops. 
Seated at the table is his wife, Florence (Flo), a more educated person, demure, and usually 
calm. Today she sits, as if in peril, large green eyes darting nervously back and forth as they 
follow his every move. Across from her on the table is an uncut melon; next to it, a large 
knife. Both husband and wife appear agitated, and an argument is about to ensue as George 
leans suddenly forward, glaring at his wife’s startled face, placing both his large rough hands 
heavily down on the table squarely in front of Flo. . . )

Flo: Mercy, George, what’s gotten into you? You’re nearly giving me a heart attack! 

George:  Don’t tempt me, woman. I want an explanation from you and I want it RIGHT 
NOW!  No more ‘a this dilly dallying around. What in tarnation was ya doin’ out there?

Flo:  Why, I’ve been in here cooking, can’t you see? 

George:  Cooking? Cooking? I’d say you been cooking up something all right and it ain’t 
been here in this kitchen! 

Flo: Why, whatever do you mean, George? 

George:  I seen you out there by the barn, Flo. Don’t you deny it.

Flo: I am being perfectly candid with you. I’ve been right here cooking you this supper since 
4 o’clock! Why on earth would I be out behind the barn and at this hour?

George: That’s what I wanna  know! I seen you from the field, Florence. Not more than 
fifteen minutes ago! I might’a lost some hearing, but I sure ain’t lost my sight yet! You was 
runnin’ toward the house like yer skirt was on fire. So whaddaya not telling me? 

(Florences’ gaze settles on the one kitchen window, and suddenly her eyes get very large. At 
this precise moment, a loud crash is heard from outside. Bruce picks up the knife from the 
table and dashes off, bellowing, exiting stage left.)


For Rambling Roses' Act 1, Scene 1 Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 5, 2013 at 12:17 AM
seems like a story... pd
Poet Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 1:03 PM
Interesting One!Enjoyed-kashinath
Anderson Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 1:39 PM
Hey Andrea, Congratulations on your win in the contest! I've asked Audrey to post this comment on my behalf. Thanks also for the kind comment. ....Jimmy
Haick Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 8:18 PM
Dear Andrea, my congratulations on your win in the contest! Peace, love, audrey
Brown Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 9:43 AM
Congratulations on your win in ARPoet's "Act One Scene One" Contest ~Andrea~. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 7:31 PM
Congrats Andrea on your HM in Constance's contest.. an excellent write and a wonderful win for u to so enjoy.. so please..ENJOY..luv.. my friend .. Linda-Marie
Richards Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 6:11 PM
You have wet our appetites with this scene....you must finish this story and tell us what happens next!! LOL !!! Congratulations Andrea...this is terrific!! ~ Carrie
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February 10, 2010 at 12:55 PM
This is terrific gotta write more I need to know what happened.Thanks so much for reading me and for your kind comments.Write more i'll be back.Teresa
Fraser Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 12:12 PM
Andrea, we definately desire a follow up to this wonderful Prose >> good luck in the contest >> James
Culverhouse Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 4:18 AM
great job, you have to write more!! or maybe let the ending be in my own mind. :)
Dufresne Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 4:49 PM
Okay you got me! Gotta stay tuned. very nice set up and I was sitting across the table kinda nervous myself! I like this.-Robert
Chachere Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 5:56 PM
the beginning had me laughing. but the end had me thinking. i enjoy all of your stage directions! can't wait for Act I Scene II. i love plays! so entertaining.<: -Always Lynette
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 5:44 PM
Andrea, You did an excellent job of roping us in and letting imagination finish the job of hanging us. Haha. Best of luck in the contest. Love, Connie
Mason Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 4:58 PM
Well, you've definitely hooked me here, Andrea!! LOL ... what happens now ???... good luck in the contest!
Sweetheart Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 5:08 AM
SOUP MAIL ...
Sweetheart Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 5:07 AM
I am quite intrigued with this scene and anxiously awaiting the next.. its a great write Andrea.. how about letting me in on the ending.. hahaha... should be a blockbuster winner .. I could just picture this scene in my head... good luck... for a good job of writing ...this interesting story... luv.. your BBF Linda-Marie..
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February 8, 2010 at 3:38 AM
Enjoyed that Andrea keep that pen flowing and thanks for your support Daniel
Byrne Avatar
February 7, 2010 at 11:24 PM
You really are good at this dialogue stuff..............................smile!
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February 7, 2010 at 11:20 PM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Andrea.Rgds Brian
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