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March. 2. 2025
A Rose in the Garden of Love Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Mystic Rose Rose
~Placed Eighth~
~Placed 10th in Brian's Contest~

 

Into the horrid heat of my summer You fall as drops of rain, Nay, as drops of love’s elixir. The broken memories I have treasured, Tumble and roll round like marbles. In this ravenous night As I sit outside all alone, Looking into the night sky I see blinking stars here and there, And my memories swim Around a starry-eyed girl My mind speeds like a steed to those days That had the beauty and brilliance, Of the arching rainbows of the blue And the glowing hues of peacock feathers You were then the rhyme and rhythm of my life. The song and melody of my spirit, The symphony in my violin, The alluring dream of my nights. Once you got into my garden of love unbidden Like a flitting butterfly, A leaping grasshopper, A honey sucking bee, A winging robin, When the breeze was hissing, When the flowers were nodding, And perched on my shoulder. I plucked for you a red, red rose, And you savored its fragrance. That very day you became my friend. You became the rose in my garden of love You spread a pervading aroma, That wafted into me with every gushing wind. You became the throb of my life. My singular passion, A rising flame, My heart’s silent language, The sole focus of my life. But now I am a jigsaw puzzle left unsolved. You are the missing piece! Please listen to the whispers of my silent heart!

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Date: 3/5/2025 12:59:00 PM
Dearest Valsa, soulful and gifted poetess, the supple strength of your yearning imagery lifts me to poetic realms of reminiscence of a lost love - and graceful is the flight through the nuanced skies of your beautiful ache, the longing so beautifully expressed in the poignant climate you create. I was especially struck by "You became the throb of my life." - such an impassioned recollection. Ah "the whispers of my silent heart" - tender yet urgent. Congratulations for your success in Rose's contest. It's an honor to share the podium with you, my sweet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/4/2025 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely rose write with a great ending. Yes, listen... Have a fun day writing away..............
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Date: 3/2/2025 10:47:00 PM
A metaphoric memory of lost love. So well expressed.
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Date: 3/2/2025 10:42:00 PM
I bet you were in your garden whispering to the roses there, oh sweet write. music here. congratulations on your win dear friend. cheers!!!
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Date: 3/2/2025 4:28:00 PM
You plucked a rose from the garden of my love, and bloomed a poem so beautiful out of it, congrats on your win, and thank you for joining. :)
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Valsa George
Date: 3/2/2025 9:33:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear Rose for your lovely comment and also for the contest

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