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A Rose in the Garden of Love

White rose blooms, a snowy heirloom, tender flesh with a golden tinge. ‘Pon coneflower iron, with groom ‘Neath trellis, a harlequin binge. Tender flesh, with a golden tinge, Those pearly blossoms help her chill. ‘Neath trellis, a harlequin binge. Her Summer buds, dressed to thrill. Those pearly blossoms help her chill. ‘Pon coneflower iron, with groom, Her Summer buds, dressed to thrill. White rose blooms, a snowy heirloom.

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Paige Hind

Date: 3/13/2025 11:17:00 PM

This has a deep message, under 'trellis" - it's beautiful.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/17/2025 7:32:00 PM

Thank you, Paige! You always encourage me!

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/4/2025 8:48:00 AM

"Her Summer buds, dressed to thrill. White rose blooms, a snowy heirloom." -- A FAV! If I keep favoring all of your poems, the rest of my bloom-list will be dulled by your profound glitter.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/17/2025 7:36:00 PM

Thank you kindly, dear Joe! ~ Kim

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/4/2025 6:43:00 AM

I love this poem. White roses seem to be scarce, but are perfect for a wedding. I enjoyed how the words moved through the poem, reinvesting in the flower theme. Congratulations on your perfection writing a beautiful pantoum.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/17/2025 7:37:00 PM

Thank you kindly, Hilda! I feel encouraged!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/4/2025 5:35:00 AM

Dear Kim, What a beautifully woven carpet of elegance and romance. I kept thinking how the white rose, tender yet strong, captures both the delicate and enduring nature of love. I think your words bloom with grace, much like the garden you paint with each line a petal, unfolding with beauty. A truly enchanting piece! Spring Blessings, my Dear Friend, Daniel

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/17/2025 7:40:00 PM

You are always so sweet! Thank you, dear Daniel!