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A Rose Beneath the Snow

A sprinkling of fairy dust early in the morning an airy dawn arrives on the wings of an angel music of nature flutes by with all its first bring I own daylight quills and Longfellow's archangel While the rose sleeps beneath the moist earth safely beneath the snow waiting for rebirth guardians of the galaxy are closing in on stars I don't hear a sound not even the tooting of cars Outside the breeze is slipping through the trees as quietly as the memes of God's silent smiles I own hopes so big they bring me to my knees and a belief that will help me through the miles Dance while you still can He says to my heart, as I hear the sound of music, ... I do my part.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 12/18/2020 6:19:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this gorgeous piece.
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Date: 12/18/2020 11:20:00 AM
Dear Richard, glad you enjoyed the rose in the snow, have a wonderful day.
Date: 12/18/2020 6:16:00 AM
Favorite line: I own daylight quills and Longfellow's archangel
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Date: 12/18/2020 11:19:00 AM
Hello Kim, I wish I was born in the era of Longfellow, what a story my quill would tell. Thanks for your kind visit dear friend, Have a great day.
Date: 12/18/2020 5:48:00 AM
Lovely vision - a I N S P I R A T I O N and heartfelt melody that sings to the reader, inspiring dreams and joy within. such a beauty. God bless you richly sweet lady
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Date: 12/18/2020 11:19:00 AM
Dear Regina, the beauty is inthe kinship of two roses, you and I. Thank you for stopping by.
Date: 12/17/2020 3:20:00 PM
A rose waiting patiently for rebirth, Wonderful write Vie..
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Date: 12/18/2020 11:18:00 AM
Many lifetimes await this rose Joseph, thanks for dropping by, Merry Christmas
Date: 12/17/2020 8:33:00 AM
"...I do my part." beautiful ending to a beautiful poem. Another fav for me. So many memorable meaningful lines. Thank you Rose for this Christmas gift. Mikey.
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Date: 12/18/2020 11:17:00 AM
Dear Vernon, thanks for stopping by, roses are resilient and durable. even under the snow.

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