A Rose Arose

What wondrous sight hath met my eyes this morn?
A perfect rose my garden hath just borne
Of colour red that’s ne’er been seen before
Perhaps it’s just a dream and nothing more

But wait, I never bade a rose grow there
What miracle of life, with form so fair
Could find its way into that very place
Where only yesterday I saw your face?

I tremble at the thought of stepping out
To see what fortune’s hand hast cast about
My heart behaves as though it were sixteen
For, then I see you rise out of that scene

No colour in the world can quite compare
To those that form your flaming auburn hair ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Gass Avatar
November 28, 2008 at 4:22 AM
This sonnet is "a perfect rose". Beautiful in both structure and sentiment. Thank you, once again, for all of your kind words and comment. I wrote Crystal River after being very upset and depressed and I needed to be in a happier, softer place. I'm so glad I found PoutrySoup. Be well, my friend and happy writing. Love Robin
White Avatar
November 5, 2008 at 3:27 PM
what a elegant and metaphorical write, awesome and thanks for your kind comments, take care D-nyce
Gorelick Avatar
November 5, 2008 at 7:41 AM
Theres that redhead again! Lovely. BG
Jordan Avatar
November 5, 2008 at 6:57 AM
Nigel this is a very beautiful Sonnet - I just adored it - very talented writing - That you for all of your comments and supportive friendship - God Bless
Richards Avatar
November 5, 2008 at 6:23 AM
You must put this to music! It is so lovely a song to sing! Another poem of love Nigel...you devil you! ~ Carrie
Kelly Avatar
November 5, 2008 at 4:03 AM
Clever naming and a sweet presentation , Nigel ....
Reynolds Avatar
November 5, 2008 at 3:26 AM
Sigh...a dreamy write for your dreamy lady. :) My baby boy has copper colored hair, and I am so enchanted by it's beauty! Love Kristin
Torres Avatar
November 5, 2008 at 2:52 AM
Very sweet and loving Nigel. You crooner you. I love this write my friend. It's a very fine write. God bless you my friend. Michael Torres
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