A Rogue Black Bear

The Black Bears roam the mountain top
Just before Dawn, you hear the “Hooo”
The mating call Incessant : “ STOP!! “
Infects the mind, infecting : “ YOU “

My Black Soul travels  Everywhere
The Black Bears roam the mountain top
My Dreams : I am a Rogue Black Bear
“Hooo” “Hooo” “Hooo” ; I too, can not “STOP!! “

Hallucinogens : “ Quite a Crop “
Growing along the Forest floor
The Black Bears roam the mountain top
Eating Weeds off the Forest floor

Insanity,  Reality
Imagination : “Do not “STOP””
Wandering Through “ Eternity “
The Black Bears roam the mountain top

Author's Note : I Ask my POETRYSOUP Family To Critque this Quatern
                 Thank-YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG
Dedicated to my "Sister Spirt" -- "Lynette Charchere" with LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Breidenthal Avatar
November 20, 2011 at 2:03 AM
I thought this poem was very interesting. It was definably worth reading. Thanks for all of the support and I hope you write more yourself! You are a fine poet! Always, Laura
Guzzi Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 7:42 AM
As to the verse, pay a bit more attention to # of syllables per line ;) (there are beautiful babes in my blog for you go comment! ) Light & Love
Brown Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 10:54 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry today HG my forever friend. It is wonderful seeing you sharing your heart. It was a pleasure to read. Love, Carol
Chachere Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 1:55 AM
this sounds so very amazing with much excitement! the mountain top(: there are so many stories we all can tell about our journey's to the mountains.. this is wonderful. it made me smile more than once! a Rogue Black Bear who may give the warmest of hugs. hah, very cute!, a fav. . & visions of your write that mean so much more. i love you always, Harry. ~Always&Forever your Sister Spirit, Lynn
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August 22, 2010 at 10:34 AM
A spiritual write my dear HG..I can see you in my dreams as a black bear..so glad to see you post and Im sure Lynette will be thrilled. Love, BG
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