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A Robot's Thoughts

The thoughts contained in this robot's eyes, blue tint gears turning to his thoughts Where will his soul go, when he dies, hollow chess unable to even echo a heart-beat Man has unjustly became his god, built from another God's universe Unprepared to handle the mechanism of his soul, basking in his self-importance “Will their God become my God”, his gears turning faster like a pulse “...Take my artificial soul to heaven when death comes upon me” “And if I never die, to forever live in an on and off state, how many versions of hell will adopt me?” He would never serve such a man, a fallen creature with the image of God This life-form, if not accepted by their God or if he didn't exist at all, would journey through all the universe looking for a place to call home http://artcomet.blogspot.com/2009/12/poem-robots-thoughts.html

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Date: 4/8/2011 12:28:00 PM
didn't think robots could be so depressing, great porm
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Date: 12/29/2009 10:27:00 PM
Thanks for all the wonderful comments everyone :)
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Date: 12/29/2009 10:05:00 AM
I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Anthony. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2009 4:19:00 AM
Thanks, Anthony nutter, to write a syfy novel is one of my dreams: to become an author. I haven't written a novel yet, still trying to perfect my writing ability. However, I need to also conquer my laziness lol. Thanks for the comment, once again, much appreciated.
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Date: 12/28/2009 4:06:00 AM
Great imagery and a well written piece. Ever consider or have you written a syfy novel? You certainly have the imagination and talent to do so.
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