A Robot's Thoughts

The thoughts contained in this robot's eyes, blue tint gears turning to his thoughts
Where will his soul go, when he dies, hollow chess unable to even echo a heart-beat
Man has unjustly became his god, built from another God's universe
Unprepared to handle the mechanism of his soul, basking in his self-importance
“Will their God become my God”, his gears turning faster like a pulse
“...Take my artificial soul to heaven when death comes upon me”
“And if I never die, to forever live in an on and off state, how many versions of hell will adopt 
me?”
He would never serve such a man, a fallen creature with the image of God
This life-form, if not accepted by their God or if he didn't exist at all, would journey through 
all the universe looking for a place to call home



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Lacey Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 12:28 PM
didn't think robots could be so depressing, great porm
Souls Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 10:27 PM
Thanks for all the wonderful comments everyone :)
Brown Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 10:05 AM
I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Anthony. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Souls Avatar
December 28, 2009 at 4:19 AM
Thanks, Anthony nutter, to write a syfy novel is one of my dreams: to become an author. I haven't written a novel yet, still trying to perfect my writing ability. However, I need to also conquer my laziness lol. Thanks for the comment, once again, much appreciated.
Nutter Avatar
December 28, 2009 at 4:06 AM
Great imagery and a well written piece. Ever consider or have you written a syfy novel? You certainly have the imagination and talent to do so.
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