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A Robin’s Song

The bright sunshine signalled a new dawn, Lazily, I stretched and yawned, Not truly ready to face the day, As I looked out of my window, my neighbour shouted, it’s beautiful today. On a thin and fragile branch, I noticed a Robin was resting his feet, A charmer he was , and to my eyes, he was a treat, His colourful coat was white, brown and red, Seeing him made me feel glad I had gotten out of bed. With his melodiously sweet trill, the leaves on the trees seem to flutter with his song, Notes rise and fall and with the gentle breeze, the branches swayed in a rhythmic dance, His tune filled the Spring air, and not long, a female came along, Witnessing their interactions was a beautiful moment for me. Sometimes in life, unexpectedly beautiful things do happen by chance. by Zyrool

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/29/2025 6:53:00 AM

Dear Zyrool, a beautiful morning gift with a delicate dance of light, color, and melody that stirs the soul awake. I felt the warmth of that fragile branch, the robin’s charming coat, and the sweet trill that makes the world pause in wonder. Ph, how unexpected beauty can quietly transform a day, just like your words have brightened mine. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/30/2025 3:13:00 AM

Hello Daniel, thank you for the read and your lovely words, much appreciated. Sending Blessings and wishing you a fabulous weekend, my friend.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/28/2025 9:21:00 PM

Robins seem to be happy optimists. This is a beautiful poem with a joyful message.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/30/2025 9:12:00 AM

Thank you for the read and your beautiful words. Hilda. Sending Blessings your way my friend.

Paige Hind

Date: 5/28/2025 6:34:00 PM

A poem that's hopeful- a belated good morning, lol

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/30/2025 8:57:00 AM

Hello Paige, thank you for the read, my friend. Sending Blessings your way.

Anne Winter

Date: 5/28/2025 7:16:00 AM

Dear Zyrool, a beautiful poem! I love listening to the birds singing in the morning. It makes my day much better. Your poem is absolutely exquisite! I enjoyed reading it. Best, Anne

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/30/2025 8:56:00 AM

Hello Anne, thank you so much for your beautiful words, means a lot. Wishing you a great day and a wonderful weekend, my poet friend.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/27/2025 4:46:00 PM

Zyrool, Your vivid descriptions of this most enjoyable experience are very appealing. Janice

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/28/2025 5:57:00 AM

Hello Janice, thank you for the visit and your lovely words, much appreciated. Wishing you a wonderful rest of the week. Zyrool

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/26/2025 10:22:00 AM

Robins seem to be the only bird I occasionally see. They are so lovely. Love the song too.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/27/2025 3:11:00 AM

Hello Victor, thank you for the read, means a lot. I have a pair of them in my pear tree two years now. Have a beautiful day my poet friend.

Valsa George

Date: 5/26/2025 6:10:00 AM

Early morning watching a robin sing in melodious strains is a refreshing sight. Beautiful poem, dear Zyrool

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/27/2025 3:07:00 AM

Hello Valsa, thank you so much for the visit and your lovely words. Wishing you a wonderful rest of the week, my friend.

Tom Woody

Date: 5/26/2025 5:10:00 AM

Birds are a special morning gift. And if there is sun in the morning all the better. Thx Zyrool, I feel better about getting up today already

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/27/2025 3:06:00 AM

Hello Tom, thank you for the read and comment. I agree birds are special. Wishing you a great rest of the week, my friend.