A Road Still Driven

At dusk`s eerie cry: We rise. Winds prevailing in no direction, hurricanes lacking a calm eye. Twilight walkers deceased in spirit. Our quest begins. A damned trade trailing on quicksand. Plummeting on a city pavement. Eyes gape reflecting thought- disdain in decent women, impertinence from men, boys tremble. All screech- "Woman of the night." IN DISGUST. Even I aspire for a stable port. Dreams of discovering the land of Home. My lewd road still shamefully driven Only comfort a compass without North needle.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 12/20/2013 8:16:00 AM
Very effective piece. You might enjoy my poem caller Red door.
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Date: 10/8/2013 9:00:00 PM
Yvette, congrats........ enjoyed :) LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/6/2013 7:46:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this poem of passion and longing. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 10/6/2013 5:56:00 PM
Yvette CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting the ""LONGING poem"" contest <----- Awesome!! If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem "FORBIDDEN". Enjoy my latest blog! "ALL SHE WROTE" if you like:) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15995&PoetID=18720 -------take care & enjoy your coming week. Love*** Linda
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Date: 9/15/2013 9:16:00 PM
This is cryptically beautiful to me. The full meaning of the poem might be escaping me. The last verse describes you without compass or home.....I hope poetry helps you find these...you have real talent.
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Date: 12/10/2012 10:34:00 AM
Wow, this is a powerful write indeed! The last two lines are perfect. I'm going to keep my eye on your poetry!
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Date: 12/8/2012 9:25:00 AM
WHoa Yvette! This is a powerful write! I love how you've developed the theme and brought out the angst - the disdain shown by human beings towards their fellow human beings is daunting indeed. Very well written poem!
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Yvette Lisa Ndlovu
Date: 12/8/2012 9:49:00 AM
thank you!I was actually inspired by your write :)
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