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A River Speaks

I'm surging onward to my destiny! What more for me to crave as I run south (toward Delta's bosom to my love, the Sea) than his consuming kiss upon my mouth?

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/12/2022 12:36:00 PM

Delightful, Andrea ~

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/1/2022 12:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your New win. Now you have two wins. A "Wonderful" write. I love the sea. Have a blessed day....................

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/18/2020 10:51:00 PM

So lovely Andrea - flowing like the serene river to join with the sea! Congratulations on your Trophy win! Blessings my friend.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/18/2020 3:51:00 PM

YAY! Congratulations on your Trophy win for this gorgeous verse Andrea. I loved it too! Blessings xxoo

Francis J Grasso

Date: 6/18/2020 8:53:00 AM

Congratulations on top honors, Andrea! This is a beautiful, elegant piece. I'm off now, to read the rest of this intriguing poem. ...Fran

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 6/18/2020 8:13:00 AM

A sincere congratulations on your 1st Place Trophy win in the Rithimus Divisa 3 Poetry Contest, Andrea - this was such a tough one to judge, with so many wonderful writes, that it came down to small things in the end. Many kind thanks for submitting, and especially for your patience - this is a gem to be proud of! Blessings, My Friend! - the bard

James Inman

Date: 6/18/2020 8:12:00 AM

You chose a beautiful stanza from a lovely poem Andrea. Well done.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/23/2020 11:24:00 AM

This is beautiful Andrea - best wishes for the contest. Blessings. Jennifer.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/21/2020 1:22:00 AM

Beautifully penned; good luck in the contest Andrea.

Gideon Foli

Date: 4/20/2020 1:55:00 PM

I love the way the River is personified. There is always something new to learn from your poems huh. You're such a beautiful writer. Love and hugs Andrea!

Gary Radice

Date: 4/20/2020 12:44:00 PM

This is excellent! Can I add that it 'flows' beautifully. :)

John Watt

Date: 4/20/2020 12:23:00 PM

Andrea, this is fabulous! I left you a comment at 'My Destiny'. Hugs ~ John

Len Gasun

Date: 4/20/2020 12:06:00 PM

Splendid write my dear friend. I'm especially mesmerized by your last line. I always love reading your poem/s dear. Sorry, I was super busy. Again, Thanks for the card, letter and poems. God bless you.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/20/2020 7:29:00 AM

The river speaks well--lovely lines, Andrea.

John Lawless

Date: 4/20/2020 7:00:00 AM

WOW! This grabbed me, slapped me gently in the face, yanked me by the shirt collar and shouted "read it again read it again". And again another WOW

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/20/2020 6:28:00 AM

ARE YOU SERIOUS WITH ME???? This is superb! Only you could make something like this burn with passion and sensuality. Woman...I'm beyond impressed. :)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 4/20/2020 5:41:00 AM

Brill and sensational. ! A kiss on the rivers mouth as it joins the sea, you inspired poetry in me. Kudos for this super poem. Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.

Jcb Brul

Date: 4/20/2020 4:47:00 AM

Simply endearing! Best luck!

Jenish Somadas

Date: 4/20/2020 2:19:00 AM

Beautifully penned lines Andrea.. Good luck in the contest..

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/19/2020 6:41:00 PM

Oh yes. <3