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A River Speaks Premiere Contest Winner

I'm surging onward to my destiny! What more for me to crave as I run south (toward Delta's bosom to my love, the Sea) than his consuming kiss upon my mouth?

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Date: 11/12/2022 12:36:00 PM
Delightful, Andrea ~
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Date: 3/1/2022 12:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your New win. Now you have two wins. A "Wonderful" write. I love the sea. Have a blessed day....................
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Date: 6/18/2020 10:51:00 PM
So lovely Andrea - flowing like the serene river to join with the sea! Congratulations on your Trophy win! Blessings my friend.
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Date: 6/18/2020 3:51:00 PM
YAY! Congratulations on your Trophy win for this gorgeous verse Andrea. I loved it too! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/18/2020 8:53:00 AM
Congratulations on top honors, Andrea! This is a beautiful, elegant piece. I'm off now, to read the rest of this intriguing poem. ...Fran
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Date: 6/18/2020 8:13:00 AM
A sincere congratulations on your 1st Place Trophy win in the Rithimus Divisa 3 Poetry Contest, Andrea - this was such a tough one to judge, with so many wonderful writes, that it came down to small things in the end. Many kind thanks for submitting, and especially for your patience - this is a gem to be proud of! Blessings, My Friend! - the bard
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Date: 6/18/2020 8:12:00 AM
You chose a beautiful stanza from a lovely poem Andrea. Well done.
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Date: 4/23/2020 11:24:00 AM
This is beautiful Andrea - best wishes for the contest. Blessings. Jennifer.
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Date: 4/21/2020 1:22:00 AM
Beautifully penned; good luck in the contest Andrea.
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Date: 4/20/2020 1:55:00 PM
I love the way the River is personified. There is always something new to learn from your poems huh. You're such a beautiful writer. Love and hugs Andrea!
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Date: 4/20/2020 12:44:00 PM
This is excellent! Can I add that it 'flows' beautifully. :)
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Date: 4/20/2020 12:23:00 PM
Andrea, this is fabulous! I left you a comment at 'My Destiny'. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 4/20/2020 12:06:00 PM
Splendid write my dear friend. I'm especially mesmerized by your last line. I always love reading your poem/s dear. Sorry, I was super busy. Again, Thanks for the card, letter and poems. God bless you.
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Date: 4/20/2020 7:29:00 AM
The river speaks well--lovely lines, Andrea.
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Date: 4/20/2020 7:00:00 AM
WOW! This grabbed me, slapped me gently in the face, yanked me by the shirt collar and shouted "read it again read it again". And again another WOW
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Date: 4/20/2020 6:28:00 AM
ARE YOU SERIOUS WITH ME???? This is superb! Only you could make something like this burn with passion and sensuality. Woman...I'm beyond impressed. :)
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Date: 4/20/2020 5:41:00 AM
Brill and sensational. ! A kiss on the rivers mouth as it joins the sea, you inspired poetry in me. Kudos for this super poem. Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
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Date: 4/20/2020 4:47:00 AM
Simply endearing! Best luck!
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Date: 4/20/2020 2:19:00 AM
Beautifully penned lines Andrea.. Good luck in the contest..
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Date: 4/19/2020 6:41:00 PM
Oh yes. <3
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