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A River Meandering

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Written, May 26, 2025
For the International Contest, Choose A Line 2
Sponsor, Joseph May 

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"There's a river meandering through the mind" I love nature and wandering among the green trees, and following the bubbling path of a cool blue river; as it meanders and twists by jagged rocks and reeds, where ducks and swans make nests in the shade, And when I go to sleep at night I meander that river; I explore and rest upon polished by years stones. I really like watching the sweet fish swimming along, so graceful, and quite impossible to catch; the sun reflects in the water and makes them like gold, like angels floating here and there so beautifully. The birds sing in the leaning trees a symphony for me, with a thousand callings drifting in the forest air; o, the river is moving, flowing, going somewhere for me so always, there's a river meandering through the mind.

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Date: 5/29/2025 12:00:00 AM
Very lovely Constance <3
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Date: 5/27/2025 11:03:00 AM
Nice poem. I was trying to find some philosophy in it, and I found in many lines. Beautiful.
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