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A river

Jasmine aroma riding the evening winds Blinds draw them inside Arms are intertwined Water collects in the high hills Looking for a gate to melt its thrill Rain joins beating many a thorn They clash and unite A river is born ___________ 5 July 2025

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Date: 7/6/2025 4:39:00 AM
Nice write!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/7/2025 10:22:00 AM
Thanks much, dear friend. ... Probir
Date: 7/5/2025 10:52:00 AM
What a lovely poem, l can visualize it all from your words. Thank you for sharing your poem today. J.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/5/2025 6:52:00 PM
Thanks much, dear poet. Glad to hear that my 'River' pleased you. ..... Probir

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