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A Rising Star

Mr Elisha Oitis
Would be of little notice
Were he not the clever creator
Of the handy elevator.





For John Freeman's Giggle contest.

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Andrea Dietrich

August 19, 2010 at 10:42 PM

congrats, Joyce, it was a great entry.

Poet Destroyer A

August 19, 2010 at 6:30 PM

Impressive & enjoyed,..p.d.

Francine Roberts

August 18, 2010 at 11:42 AM

good one, congrats on your win

Daniel Cwiak

August 18, 2010 at 8:48 AM

Nice one, Joyce. There's a guy who had his ups and downs...lol. Congrats on your win. Dan C

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 18, 2010 at 4:51 AM

Congratulations Joyce on your win in John Freeman's contest "Giggle Poetry". Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

August 17, 2010 at 9:57 PM

Great Poem. Many congrats on your win and thanks for the comments.

Wilma Neels

August 17, 2010 at 8:50 PM

Congratulations Joyce, on your win in John's contest :) love Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

August 17, 2010 at 6:45 PM

Hey, a new tidbit for me to learn about! congrats on your win, JOyce!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 17, 2010 at 5:48 PM

Congrats Joyce on your winning poem in the Giggles Poetry contest with another awesome write and sweet victory .. enjoy my friend..with luv..caio..

Carolyn Devonshire

August 17, 2010 at 5:14 PM

How did I miss this one earlier? It's terrific, Joyce and congratulations on your well-deserved win. Love, Carolyn

Gerard Keogh Jr.

August 17, 2010 at 5:07 PM

I like this form because you can compress history into a quick statement. You have done that here. Thank you for your knd remarks! Regards, Gerard.

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 17, 2010 at 5:00 PM

Congrats on the win, Joyce

John Freeman

August 17, 2010 at 4:59 PM

Congratulations with "Rising Star" being a second place victory for you, Joyce. Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick

August 17, 2010 at 2:50 PM

Great write that is educational and well written...Good luck in the contest that is winners' circle for sure..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara