A Rise Within the Fall

i am grounded
in yesterday's thoughts
blushed of crimson glow
i want to tarry there
in winded breaths
undressing like the trees
spun of autumn's touch
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 3:37 AM
"i want to tarry there" ... I do too!
Adams Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 5:29 AM
Thank you. The mornings are growing cooler and the trees starting to turn. The changes sparked my muse :) hugs
Chiri Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 5:31 PM
That was amazing Sandy! Really such an amazing work of art! Oh I hope you don't mind me going back and reading some of your beautiful poems?!;)
Adams Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 8:04 PM
thanks Brenda, this was just a scribble one afternoon... so was the silly top down poem...sometimes inspiration comes and i just jot a few lines, sometimes i build off it, some times not....i don't mind you reading, i feel honored :) hugs
Andresen Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 9:39 AM
- A wonderful poem, Sandra :) - Autumn is here already - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 9:45 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise...i am sad to see summer go, autumn starts out beautiful, but it's more a show, a grand finale to summer before the bitter cold.... hugs :)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 8:56 AM
There is a subtle beauty to this piece.
Adams Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 9:44 AM
Thank you Rick...one of those driving along, seeing something and the muse starts to sing moments, thank God for talk to text, if i am alone, i can text myself her thoughts and share them later :) hugs
Hamilton Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 9:51 PM
Just lovely, ditto to all the other comments, your usual brilliance Sandy!
Adams Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 9:42 AM
Thank you John, my muse has been inspired a lot these lately, all the beauty of nature right now, hard not to be inspired :) hugs
Goff Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 7:20 PM
Agree with comments below, Sandra! gorgeous!
Adams Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 9:41 AM
Thank you so much for your visit and lovely comment James :)
Wolf Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 6:54 PM
Profound write. So interesting how you've connected the title to the theme of this nifty write. Wonderfully imaged and imagined! :) gw
Adams Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 9:40 AM
Thank you Gershon...see sometimes my muse comes out of the dark :) hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 6:45 PM
So beautiful! Has a sensual quality!
Adams Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 9:40 AM
Thank you Kim...rare for my muse to go sensual but it happens on occasion :) hugs
Green Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 5:09 PM
Now this was deep, 'grounded in yesterday's thoughts' Wow. This was beautiful, it feels euphoric, as if these thoughts are wafting on a gentle breeze. Loved this Sandy.
Adams Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 5:21 PM
Thank you. Not what I set out to write. The skies looked dark but rays were cascading down and one tree is dressed in fall :) hugs
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