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A Revelation

A Revelation

Sunrise greeted me through a purple haze.
The softest cooling breeze caressed my cheek.
Mauve filtered into rose clouds to amaze 
As prayerful meditation I did seek
Communion’s Divine guidance in my mind.
Did I hear the flutter of angel wings?
Your answer, to just release I did find.
When wrapped in Your agape love my heart sings.
Today I will begin my brand new start.
I leave my sorrow of loss in the past.
I let Your bright light fill my soul, my heart,
Let worries flee in calmness that will last.
As dawn fills morning skies in ev’ry hue
I know my great salvation lies with You.

4-26-22

Poem of the Day April 28, 2022
Thank you very much Poetry Soup Team.

A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE ~Sixth Place~
Contest Judged:  4/29/2022
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Raven Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 2:32 PM
Hi Connie, this is a truly wonderful Sonnet. It sings in such a gentle whisper as your words paint such tender visions on the canvas of the mind. Belated congratulations on your poem of the day honour with this beautiful write. You bring tears from the heart, Connie. Has to be a fave. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 6:57 PM
This poem came to me as dawn was breaking Mike. I feel a close connection to the divine when in nature, especially during the twilight hours of dawn and dusk. I feel honored that you faved this sonnet. Thank you very much for your lovely comments. Blessings xxoo
Maverick Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 7:57 AM
Amen Connie.'
George Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 8:23 PM
Hi Connie, I wonder how I missed seeing this as poem of the day though I had enjoyed reading this before. Congratulations on your win and POTD
Foster Avatar
June 12, 2022 at 6:21 AM
Excellent write. Beautiful picture and lovely words. Ann
Goldsmith Avatar
June 11, 2022 at 12:29 PM
WOW!!! What a wonderful write/picture. Love It and Fave It. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 11, 2022 at 1:54 PM
Thank you very much for honoring my sonnet with a fave Paula. Morning sunrise is the best here because it is when the birds begin to sing. Blessings xxoo
Reese Avatar
June 7, 2022 at 7:19 AM
This is a very beautiful sonnet; I like how you have woven the beauty of nature which God has made with the beauty of who He is. I also think you have the skills for the Rondea Redouble contest. I'm sure you can find the inspiration.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 5:49 AM
I will check it out Charles. Thank you for your encouragement. Blessings xxoo
Dutta Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 4:17 AM
So soothing and inspiring. I just love the composition. CONGRATS Blessings
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 9:04 AM
Thank you very much Anisha. I am trying to catch up on reading poetry here. I was ill for two months and it is so great being back. I hope this finds you well. Blessings xxoo
Zahid Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 6:40 AM
Last lines are amazing. Congratulations in your POTD. A great sonnet it is. Blessings
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 9:05 AM
Thank you very much my friend. Blessings xxoo
Proxenos Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 12:33 PM
Hi Connie please forgive this so belated congratulations for POTD - Such a soulful write with such enormous faith and awesome acknowledgment of your salvation - you are a rare gem on this site dear Connie and your poems a miracle of pure love and light. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 4:29 PM
Thank you for your lovely comment Jennifer. I am humbled by it. You are a treasure. Bless you, Connie xxoo
Parker Avatar
May 18, 2022 at 2:05 PM
To have known such a love is a true blessing, most hope, and dream, you have lived it...this treasure you shall hold for the rest of your life...as one who writes a lot of sonnets, this one touched me, dear poet
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 19, 2022 at 6:24 PM
Frederic, Knowing your wonderful poetry as I do, I am so honored by your lovely comment. I shared 40 loving years with my husband who will always remain loved and missed. I have joy in knowing our son is with him in heaven now. Thank you for your words of encouragement. Blessings xxoo
Zahid Avatar
May 13, 2022 at 8:46 AM
A great poem, congratulations on you POTD. Just read it.. Stay strong
Kannan Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 5:14 AM
That's a lovely Sonnet.... Such beautiful imagery throughout and perfect rhymes... Loved reading it Connie... Congratulations on your well deserved POTD...
Dietrich Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 9:38 PM
dropping by again. OMg, Connie. My new kitty is so precious. He is in a playful mood right now and just exploring the bedroom. I am so glad we got this kitty.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 8, 2022 at 9:50 AM
Animals are filled with wonderful energy they freely share with us. I am glad your kitty is making you both happy. Blessings on this Mother’s Day my dear friend. xxoo
Y. Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 4:41 PM
WoW! Connie, I don't know how I missed this well-written gem. I am so happy you were able to overcome sorrow and loss and got a new start from getting filled with agape love. Your faith shines bright in this write. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Happy Mother’s Day, my friend:-) Alexis
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 8, 2022 at 9:51 AM
Thank you very much Alexis. I hope you enjoy Mother’s Day if it is celebrated there today. Blessings xxoo
Callus Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 1:56 AM
This beautiful sonnet shows your strength of character and faith, Connie. Notwithstanding life's problems and loss, we have to move forward, not by forgetting or erasing the past, but by adding serenity to each future day. Congratulations regarding your win and p.o.t.d. ~ Warm regards // paul
Babcock Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 7:47 PM
Awesome poem Connie. Going in a fav for me. love phyl
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 8, 2022 at 9:53 AM
I appreciate you honoring my poem with a Fave Phyl. Thank you very much. Have a lovely Mother’s Day. Blessings xxoo
Tor Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 7:29 PM
Wow Connie love this so much it is one of my favorite favorites. God bless you for writing...
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 8, 2022 at 9:55 AM
Your words mean a lot to me Michael. Thank you very much for the Fave. I am honored by your lovely comment. Blessings xxoo
Dietrich Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 3:55 PM
just dropping by to say hi. Got home early for hubbie and he is sound asleep on a sedative.
M  Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 6:29 AM
Simply beautiful Connie! Debx
Deo Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 4:35 AM
A sonnet, a sonnet, a sonnet, sharp as a hornet. Comfy as a silk bonnet. Congrats CONNIE. Apologies I'm a bit late ( between yesterday & now, three versions of OLiVE OiL poem kept getting SYSTEM ERROR). I'm grateful, so I won't complain -- except in next poems, LOL. shalom shalom
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 8, 2022 at 9:58 AM
Thank you Anil. I have noticed tgat computers act up more on the full and new moons. Blessings xxoo
Maverick Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 10:03 AM
Well written; and well done on potd Connie.' A write full of encouragement..'
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 8, 2022 at 9:56 AM
Thank you very much Joe. Blessings xxoo
Trifiatis Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 2:59 AM
What a revelation! Congratulations on your POTD honor, dearest Connie! Blessings!
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 8, 2022 at 10:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios. Being out in Nature helps heal. Blessings xxoo
Gasun Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 6:37 AM
So beautiful! Congratulations on your POTD, your win and this stellar write my dear friend/ poetess! Thanks for sharing! God bless! Hugs.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 8, 2022 at 9:59 AM
Thank you very much Len. Blessings xxoo
Buehler Avatar
April 30, 2022 at 8:18 AM
I am back with congratulations on POTD, Connie. This is such a gorgeous poem! Blessings xxoo
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 30, 2022 at 3:26 AM
Revisiting to say congratulations, Connie. This is a sublime poem - love to read many times. Love and blessings ~ Mala
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