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A Rendezvous

soup gets cold candles fume fly in my plate june 24.05.2019 June or July Lanterne Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/19/2019 9:46:00 PM

A treat Kurt. Summer fun. I loved this one! : ) xxoo

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/26/2019 4:11:00 PM

I always like the idea of a picnic, but the reality is usually disappointing - too many flies in my plate!

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 5/26/2019 5:06:00 PM

I'd mention ants too, but lanterne is too short for this)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2019 8:38:00 PM

this is so interesting. I love it!

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 5/26/2019 5:07:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/24/2019 7:33:00 PM

Like this one!

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 5/26/2019 5:06:00 PM

Thnx, Kim)