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A Rekindling

A blow on the bird’s breast Had nearly choked the hit nerves Golden grains danced in stark dark The bird was reduced to shards A mild hand and soft lips With her river sand music Rekindled its urge to fly Today it built a small cup Of the smell from hit breast Seeking on the hay a blue rest _________________________________________________ 28/02/2017// 59 Words: What doesn’t Kill // Sponsor: Laura Loo

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Date: 3/8/2017 6:55:00 AM
Yet another masterpiece from a role model. This is just awwwwwwww... What a beautiful share...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/8/2017 7:43:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 3/2/2017 6:41:00 PM
an interesting one, Probir. I like how you made the theme based on a bird. Good luck in the contest.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/2/2017 10:15:00 PM
The right shadow in your intellect, Andrea ... is a sort of autobiography in a molecule ... Thank you ...
Date: 2/28/2017 12:18:00 PM
What a marvelous write dear, Probir! Paradise Lost and Paradise Regained! Excellent my friend! A seven!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/1/2017 3:45:00 AM
What a wonderful analogy ! ... Thank you for the allusion ... no comments for the rest ! ...

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