A Rekindling

A blow on the bird’s breast Had nearly choked the hit nerves Golden grains danced in stark dark The bird was reduced to shards A mild hand and soft lips With her river sand music Rekindled its urge to fly Today it built a small cup Of the smell from hit breast Seeking on the hay a blue rest _________________________________________________ 28/02/2017// 59 Words: What doesn’t Kill // Sponsor: Laura Loo
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Makama Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 6:55 AM
Yet another masterpiece from a role model. This is just awwwwwwww... What a beautiful share...
Gupta Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 7:43 AM
Thank you ...
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 6:41 PM
an interesting one, Probir. I like how you made the theme based on a bird. Good luck in the contest.
Gupta Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 10:15 PM
The right shadow in your intellect, Andrea ... is a sort of autobiography in a molecule ... Thank you ...
Trifiatis Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 12:18 PM
What a marvelous write dear, Probir! Paradise Lost and Paradise Regained! Excellent my friend! A seven!
Gupta Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 3:45 AM
What a wonderful analogy ! ... Thank you for the allusion ... no comments for the rest ! ...
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