A Refreshing New Day

Winter is leaving a patchwork behind
Woven lumps of snow, for spring to un-wind
Melting into flowing streams, easy to follow
Right on down to the river bend's flow
A place for my soul's revival, under tall pines, soft soil
A nice place of rest from burdening toil
I can imagine I'll be there pretty soon
Set a date with my muse sometime before noon
The river may show me something special to say
Bringing with its music, a refreshing, new day

Heidi Sands

4/10/23

Received POTD 4/12/23

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 4/15/2023 2:16:00 PM
Such a sweet, refreshing day you have described here Heidi! Enjoy your moments by the river, under the tall pines!
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Date: 4/16/2023 5:13:00 AM
Thank you very much Smita. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 4/13/2023 8:44:00 PM
So beautiful! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 4/14/2023 5:55:00 AM
Thank you Kim :)
Date: 4/13/2023 7:10:00 PM
Belated congrats on POTD, Heidi. I admire your ability to find enjoyment every day of every season! Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 4/14/2023 5:55:00 AM
Thank you Gershon :)
Date: 4/13/2023 12:38:00 AM
A lovely uplifting poem Heidi…Congrats on POTD!! Debx
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Date: 4/13/2023 5:19:00 AM
Thank you Deb. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 4/12/2023 10:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
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Date: 4/13/2023 5:18:00 AM
Thank you Jeanette. I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 4/12/2023 8:05:00 PM
A spring delight, Heidi! So creative. Love the reference to making an appointment with your muse. Such lovely images! Brought a springtime smile to my wintered heart! Congratulations on your POTD honor! A beautiful poem. Easter blessings to you.
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Date: 4/13/2023 5:18:00 AM
Thank you so much Sam. Easter Blessings to you too :)
Date: 4/12/2023 7:19:00 PM
"Winter is leaving a patchwork behind." Such a beautiful image, Heidi. Flowers appear, because Spring is here. I certainly love this time of year. May the birds sing a sweet melody, while you relax by the river with your muse. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/13/2023 5:17:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment and support Brandy :) hugs
Date: 4/12/2023 6:55:00 PM
A lovely poem Heidi, rivers are nature's works of art, always on the move and good for the muse. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 4/13/2023 5:16:00 AM
Yes they are. Thank you Belle :)
Date: 4/12/2023 5:11:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Heidi, on your receiving honour of POTD. Snow "Melting into flowing streams" - beautiful description of winter leaving, and spring bringing new life, new hope. BW ~ Mala
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Date: 4/13/2023 5:16:00 AM
Thank you. I appreciate your kind feedback and support :)
Date: 4/12/2023 1:22:00 PM
Heidi, Fond resting spot that brings meaning to the river, and purpose to the bridge. Very nice flow in this one. -Richard
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Date: 4/12/2023 2:45:00 PM
Thank you Richard. I appreciate your kind comment :)
Date: 4/12/2023 10:46:00 AM
You shouldn't have any problem being inspired in a setting like that, Heidi. A very good selection for POTD.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/12/2023 10:55:00 AM
Thank you Jim! I appreciate your kind input :)
Date: 4/12/2023 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, what a beautiful poem of transformation: )
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Date: 4/12/2023 10:08:00 AM
Thank you Stephan :)
Date: 4/12/2023 9:54:00 AM
Heidi, congratulations on your beautiful POTD! :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/12/2023 10:07:00 AM
Thank you Fin :)
Date: 4/12/2023 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A lovely write. Have a Blessed day writing away...........
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/12/2023 10:07:00 AM
Thank you very much Paula :)
Date: 4/12/2023 9:19:00 AM
This is lovely, Heidi: Congratulatiions. on POTD. SuZ
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/12/2023 10:06:00 AM
Thank you Suz. I appreciate your kind visit :)
Date: 4/12/2023 7:25:00 AM
What a beautiful poem, Heidi:-) Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 4/12/2023 7:42:00 AM
Thank you very much Edward :)
Date: 4/12/2023 7:25:00 AM
Heidi, a beautiful Spring poem, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 4/12/2023 7:42:00 AM
Thank you Tania. I appreciate your kind visit :)
Date: 4/12/2023 7:16:00 AM
After the gloom of winter the welcome season of spring is all around us Congratulations Heidi on the honour of POTD. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Date: 4/12/2023 7:41:00 AM
Thank you very much Tom. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 4/12/2023 6:40:00 AM
Sweet poem, refreshing and cooling like the melting snow flowing into streams. Congratulations Heidi on your POTD honor
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Date: 4/12/2023 7:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Valsa. I hope you have a beautiful day :)
Date: 4/12/2023 6:39:00 AM
I love how your poem flows Heidi, Wondeful write Congrats on POTD
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Date: 4/12/2023 7:01:00 AM
I am happy to hear that . Thank you very much Joseph :)
Date: 4/12/2023 6:22:00 AM
Yes refreshing! So inviting Heidi. Congratulations on your POTD! :)
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Date: 4/12/2023 6:23:00 AM
Thank you Linda! I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 4/12/2023 5:21:00 AM
CanI come with you! Your poem is like an invitation to Spring and joy.. Lovely,Congratulations!!! PPangie.
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Date: 4/12/2023 5:37:00 AM
Sure Pangie. Spring and Joy it is! I really appreciate your kind comment. Thank you very much :)
Date: 4/12/2023 5:07:00 AM
Congratulations Heidi on POTD honors. Great job!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/12/2023 5:36:00 AM
Thank you DT. ! I appreciate your comments very much :)
Date: 4/12/2023 4:59:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Heidi. Enjoy your special day my friend.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/12/2023 5:35:00 AM
Thank you for being so kind Vijay! I appreciate all your support. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 4/12/2023 2:06:00 AM
- A refreshing poem, Heidi :) -Congratulations on the p.o.t.d. ! - hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/12/2023 5:34:00 AM
Great to hear. Thank you Sunshine. Hugs :)
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