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Dedicated to Jan Allison A REAL STINKER Medically speaking, all humans have movement of their sphincter. Eruptions of sphincters can cause disturbances of epic proportions. Your fresh squeeze, young and delightful, may utter a proof that sensory brains indeed moved to a higher atmosphere from the rear. The scented sphincter will not easily dissipate, can’t wait just a sec - the sulfuric scent can linger longer unchecked. Clear the room for if you enter in too quick, a sign should really appear, quite like the caution of the Parisian catacombs, the stench of dry bones quaking under the sphincter’s attack - a real stinker in fact. His date was afright as he grew green, sped to his brother’s house, familiarity threw open the door then onto the bathroom lickety-split. That roaring relief catapulted to new heights, as a little boy’s voice leaps from the tub, “Uncle Dan!” (Name has been changed but the laugh is reel as the paper unwinds over or under - no one cares when there is a great deal of thunder) Disagreeable relations lean in to hear the tale again and again, until one has to go…real bad 12/3/2021

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Date: 12/20/2021 1:29:00 PM
A cute/funny~~write/picture. Wonder what the frog is thinking. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/20/2021 4:19:00 PM
LOL!
Date: 12/9/2021 11:21:00 AM
I’m not fond of stinkers but I would sign up for your next one, phrased so delicately ;) <33
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2021 1:20:00 PM
LOL!
Date: 12/5/2021 7:10:00 AM
Whoa! I would not want to be in the shoes of the date or the nephew. LOL. We all have to deal with those situations from time to time. I had the upset stomach of COVID that lasted a month, and it was not a pleasure for anyone around here. I appreciate the visit to my page. Your comments were uplifting. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2021 1:20:00 PM
Glad you are feeling better, poetry sister!
Date: 12/5/2021 3:21:00 AM
Very different, very clever, quite unique and very funny. well penned my friend. Blessings, hugs, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2021 1:19:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer!
Date: 12/5/2021 1:51:00 AM
This is so much fun! "That roaring relief catapulted to new heights, as a little boy’s voice leaps from the tub, “Uncle Dan!”" Love it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2021 1:19:00 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 12/4/2021 6:39:00 PM
In absolute love with the rhythm.. Silpika
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2021 1:19:00 PM
Thank you! I appreciate! xx
Date: 12/3/2021 1:15:00 PM
I'm sure Jan will love this. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/3/2021 1:34:00 PM
Thanks:)
Date: 12/3/2021 11:45:00 AM
Quite an ingenious tale you’ve told, Kim!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/3/2021 1:34:00 PM
Thank you, Lin!

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