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A Real Mom

A Real Mom

My real mom, 
let us starve sometimes. 
My claimed mother fed us, 
when we were hungry. 
My real mom, 
did not care if we had shoes, 
or the blues. 
She did not care to hear... 
about step-father lies, 
as that is how she felt, 
about things. 
My claimed mother, 
gave us blankets, 
and lunch money, 
bought what was needed... 
when there was a miracle to be had
and we were beyond sad.

My claimed mother, 
is an angel. 

My real mother... 
is not really a real mother. 
My claimed mother... 
is!
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June 29, 2026 at 5:22 PM
Your claimed mother, was your human angel with wings. How fortunate to have one of those, she is probably the reason you became a exceptional writer.
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