Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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A Ray of Sunshine

In the depths of January's blustery cold
The poet's life in poems slowly unfolds
A mood of blue is often set
Melancholy seems to be her usual cuddly soft pet 

But sometimes the table is quickly turned
Out pours some humor that she learned
Maybe she's bipolar like it's called today
At least a ray of sunshine came her way 


Form used 7,7,7, 9 words per stanza, Rhyme scheme aabb, ccdd

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Valsa George January 23, 2022 at 7:11 PM Through the gloom of darkness, a streak of light filters in. It is enough to make the surroundings brighter ! A beautiful poem, Sara ! Sara Kendrick January 24, 2022 at 4:52 AM Valsa, Your kind review of my work is a light itself. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Scott Thirtyseven January 18, 2022 at 4:38 AM Nice rhyme, great poem. Sara Kendrick January 18, 2022 at 8:51 AM Thank you, Scott. I appreciate your visit. Sara

M. L. Kiser January 17, 2022 at 5:06 PM Bipolar makes for some uncertain moments, for sure. I'm glad she found some sun. Sara Kendrick January 18, 2022 at 6:07 AM M.L., Thanks for dropping by. Yes, a person with true bipolar is probably hard to figure out. Sara

Mulu Magdalinos January 16, 2022 at 4:37 AM Mrs Sara , Excellent poem, thank you for sharing this!! Sara Kendrick January 16, 2022 at 1:59 PM Mulu, I am delighted that you said it is excellent. Sara

Caren Krutsinger January 15, 2022 at 11:12 PM "Maybe she's bipolar like it's called today" Funny how we want to label every person and quirk now. The 7779 cadence is so much fun to read, I am going to try it myself. Sara Kendrick January 16, 2022 at 1:59 PM Thank you Caren. I hope you do try it. Sara

Deb M January 15, 2022 at 11:03 PM Hey Sara…..lovely poem and ray of sunshine!! Debx Sara Kendrick January 16, 2022 at 1:56 PM Your comments were uplifting. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Bill Baker January 15, 2022 at 3:39 PM Aah, a Lind30. Thanks for the sunshine and the well written poem, Sara. You still got it! Write On! Bill Sara Kendrick January 16, 2022 at 1:54 PM Thank you, Bill. Your comments were encouraging. Sara

Silpika Kalita January 15, 2022 at 2:57 PM What a beautiful exquisite symbolic write. Quote enigmatic Sara... Silpika Sara Kendrick January 15, 2022 at 3:30 PM Silpika, Thank you for the kind review of my work. Sara

Bj Legros Kelley January 14, 2022 at 1:58 PM Such a ray of sunshine in your beautiful poem Sara! I hope you are blessed with many more golden warm rays of joy and sunshine my sweet poet friend. God bless you! I hope you and all your precious loved ones are now healthy and doing well <3 Sara Kendrick January 15, 2022 at 2:36 AM BJ, I need the blessings and rays of joy. Thanks for asking God's blessings on me. I appreciate the time spent here reading and commenting on my work. Sara

Victor Buhagiar January 13, 2022 at 3:43 AM Shouldn't we all have a ray of sunshine? Lovely poem. Blessings. Sara Kendrick January 15, 2022 at 2:30 AM Yes, Victor, we should have a ray of sunshine and a ray of hope in this life. Thanks for the blessings. Sara

Eve Roper January 12, 2022 at 9:30 AM Great verse, Sara. Blessing to you thorough out your new year my friend. Sara Kendrick January 15, 2022 at 2:28 AM Thank you, Eve, for the blessings for the New Year. We need all of those blessings we can get in our present circumstances. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen January 12, 2022 at 8:28 AM - Really well written, Sara - Yesterday we had a beautiful sunny day ... today, the day is gray and heavy - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sara Kendrick January 13, 2022 at 9:19 AM SS, I am so glad you had a good day. Those good ones sprinkled in there during the winter help it to go by much better. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Alexis Y. January 12, 2022 at 7:51 AM Hi Sara, I really enjoyed this. We all can use a bit of sunshine. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day-Alexis Sara Kendrick January 12, 2022 at 8:17 AM Alexis, We do need a little ray and sometimes a whole day's worth. Sunlight does have healing effects on the body and in winter it feels so good. Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Gershon Wolf January 10, 2022 at 9:04 PM How lovely, Sara! I really needed the ray of sunshine that you have so poetically provided here. Thank you so much! Joy forever, Gershon Sara Kendrick January 11, 2022 at 4:02 AM Gershon, I do need that happiness in my life because some days are not so easy. Your visit is appreciated. Sara

Kim Merryman January 10, 2022 at 8:46 PM I like this, Sara! I haven't tried this form yet but you did an excellent job with it. Blessings, Kim M Sara Kendrick January 11, 2022 at 4:00 AM Why, thank you..Sara

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed January 10, 2022 at 1:05 PM Is it the cold blues! "Melancholy seems to be her usual cuddly soft pet " isn't it everybody poet's! So beautifully expressed in terms of the cold. "Out pours some humor that she learned" Delightful imagery! "Form and Rhyme scheme" from the first Haiku i figured you are a complete poet. Thanks - Marshall Sara Kendrick January 10, 2022 at 3:21 PM Marshall, I think I lean towards melancholy because it is a personality trait that is inherited. Your presence at my page was uplifting. Sara

Robert Lindley January 10, 2022 at 12:20 PM A most wonderful and a very creative new composition. Depth, imagery rhyme and heart all score. Soupmail sent on the final verse. A fav.. God bless.. Robert Lindley January 10, 2022 at 2:50 PM I miscount myself so often in my compositions that usually I have to do three counts to be sure. And those last minute -edits- get me so often. This is indeed a brilliant first outing in this new Lind30 poetry form. Thank you for gifting a wonderful new poem that hits the marks. God bless. Sara Kendrick January 10, 2022 at 2:21 PM Robert, I did add a word to correct how I thought it would sound and that was when I made the error of having ten words. Whoa!! Thanks for the visit and for faving my work. Sara