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A Rattling Rhyme

A RATTLING RHYME “Few things are more delightful than grandchildren fighting over your lap.” – Doug Larson (and I add laptop or tablet) WHISPER SWEET NULLS Up the steps. Here them roar - here they come with big smiles. These two brothers at odds in short race to the door. Their short grandmother tall, she leans down to give hugs, but must wait for the bell - has great ring - what a ball! Off fly shoes and then socks And each boy has one thing on their mind: to be first to put thumbs to the box. Other toys left idle. They’re no match for the fire of the games that conspire - That do whisper sweet nulls. Off they run once again after filling their tums. They do tear off their shirts off to fight - see who reigns. The old box - it stays cold for their sight, it is set on the same old new games and the ads that are bold. Their behinds, they are warm in their grandmother’s chair and so likely to say when bell rings, “it’s not fair!” They are forced to go home. There are chores; and some odds and their ends for their school but no games! That’s not cool.

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Date: 3/4/2020 3:00:00 PM
Indeed you did a rattling rhyme. GREAT job, Kim. I like their behinds staying warm. That was so cute.
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Date: 3/4/2020 1:51:00 PM
This is sucsh a cute poem Kim, I loved it - best wishes - sounds like a win! Blessings, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/4/2020 2:14:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer! :)
Date: 3/3/2020 6:40:00 PM
Kim, fun write for the contest, best of luck _Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/3/2020 8:58:00 PM
Thank you, Constance!
Date: 3/3/2020 2:43:00 PM
This was a fun string of rhymes. I can sense the grandkids' energy. I like the part about their short grandmother being tall. It's all about perspective.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/3/2020 8:58:00 PM
It is isn’t it! Thank you, Juliet!

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