A Rattling Rhyme

A RATTLING RHYME

“Few things are more delightful than grandchildren fighting
over your lap.” – Doug Larson (and I add laptop or tablet)

WHISPER SWEET NULLS

Up the steps. Here them roar -
here they come with big smiles.
These two brothers at odds 
in short race to the door.

Their short grandmother tall,
she leans down to give hugs,
but must wait for the bell -
has great ring - what a ball!

Off fly shoes and then socks
And each boy has one thing
on their mind: to be first
to put thumbs to the box.

Other toys left idle.
They’re no match for the fire
of the games that conspire -
That do whisper sweet nulls.

Off they run once again
after filling their tums.
They do tear off their shirts
off to fight - see who reigns.

The old box - it stays cold
for their sight, it is set
on the same old new games
and the ads that are bold.

Their behinds, they are warm
in their grandmother’s chair
and so likely to say
when bell rings, “it’s not fair!”

They are forced to go home.
There are chores; and some odds
and their ends for their school
but no games! That’s not cool.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 3:00 PM
Indeed you did a rattling rhyme. GREAT job, Kim. I like their behinds staying warm. That was so cute.
Proxenos Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 1:51 PM
This is sucsh a cute poem Kim, I loved it - best wishes - sounds like a win! Blessings, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 2:14 PM
Thank you, Jennifer! :)
La France Avatar
March 3, 2020 at 6:40 PM
Kim, fun write for the contest, best of luck _Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
March 3, 2020 at 8:58 PM
Thank you, Constance!
Ligon Avatar
March 3, 2020 at 2:43 PM
This was a fun string of rhymes. I can sense the grandkids' energy. I like the part about their short grandmother being tall. It's all about perspective.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 3, 2020 at 8:58 PM
It is isn’t it! Thank you, Juliet!
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