A Rattling Rhyme

Our sixth grade classmate Sarah Lovely Sweetheart was a formidable foe,
Outside beauty was her forte, but her heart was a giant big fat woe.
Many of the twelve-year old boys were smitten, because she was pretty and a glow.
Her eyes shined the most fantastic blue with a curious silver, made just so.
We girls had figured out her angle, because we were not so very slow.
Did I say she could lie better than our former resident liar, Little Joe?
Smoothly, effortlessly, she could pour them out like sweet molasses, really slow.
It did not help the boys that she was stacked up like a perky Marilyn Monroe.
They blindly followed her like short puppies, gaping and fawning, to and fro.
Really funny to see, as she was taller than them by half a foot or so.
Sarah Lovely Sweetheart lied, stole, fought and bit, but her male fans would never know.
Because she only revealed her true self to us girls, that big fat hairy ho.

Written:  July 29, 1018
Contest Entered:  A Rattling Rhyme Contest	Sponsor:  Nina Parameter

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Date: 8/26/2018 5:25:00 AM
You got my laughter in cracked-up form - the last line is one heck of a clincher. A fun read, Caren. I think this chick was in my Junior High School. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/27/2018 7:07:00 AM
She was in ALL of our junior highs,Cay Cay, and she was not always blonde.
Date: 7/29/2018 2:34:00 PM
oh my, what a liar she was!! Funny last line on this one, so we can know the REAL Sarah!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/29/2018 2:44:00 PM
I know that was horrible. But I know I had to do it too Andrea. I could not resist.
Date: 7/29/2018 2:30:00 PM
Hah love this, I've know girls like that! (btw, I've posted a 'thank you' to my poetry soup friends and since you're one of them I hope you take a look!)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/29/2018 2:44:00 PM
I will take a look right now Michelle. On a blog I am thinking.
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