A Ramshackle Faith

A global index,
strive to intermix
with the universe
and it’s creator, 
find a point of view

Cosmic order
inspired journey
discovering
questions of faith

Doomsayers
predicts man
in ‘Star ships’

invades
God’s own

Help!

 © Harry J Horsman 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Maverick Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 11:31 PM
Yes Indeed Harry, help is needed..What can I Put? Only thank you for posting from your Perspective of reality, in a worthy manner Honestly is in your lines '
Makama Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 11:20 AM
Delicious lines, your imagery and creativity are royal sisters. Nice reading from the pen of your mind. Happy 2020.
Roper Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 9:48 PM
very good, Harry, good luck in the contest.
Papyrus Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 11:55 AM
People say science and religion do not mix. But, God is the greatest scientist. He invented life...something we cannot duplicate or forge!
DiMino Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 4:38 AM
For sure. A little less science and a lot more love and faith would do us all better. Well said!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 9:00 AM
I think man’s thoughts of finding refuge on other planets will be undone as a result of our destroying this planet before we have the capacity to reach another. Other worlds would not be overly sad.
Deo Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 11:25 PM
the best kind of Faith - that sees LooNG, Sir!
Michael Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 1:38 AM
It can be dangerous...forever searching the stars to get closer...to GOD...I like the message
Deo Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 11:21 PM
Ramshackle Faith in those voted : "least likely to inspire or succeed" has sustained this global village. Even if I repeat a little lady Annie Sullivan, a mighty child Helen Keller, Albanian-born St. Theresa. (could not post it above, apologies Arturo & Sir Harry)
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