Michael J. Falotico Poet Couplet

A Rainbows Cry

I sat under a cloudy sky...
                                                   Looked up to see a rainbow cry...

                                                    The colors ran down to my feet...
                                             In a puddle of sadness it filled the street...

                                                  With just two hands I scooped it up...
                                              And brushed it back on with little disrupt...

                                                    Now all the colors put back in place...
                                                   With a touch and feel of silk and lace...

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James Fraser March 5, 2012 at 1:11 PM Dreamy and lovely to read Michael. The rainbow saviour you are :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 23, 2012 at 9:30 AM wow wondrous words of imagery and visuals jere Michael.. so lovely your thoughts and creative ability... only a WK can write tender words like this.. JG forever and always luv..xoxo

Gwendolen Song January 21, 2012 at 6:54 AM Oh, I knew this one was grand..congrats on it's success. I can see this one as an opener in your next book...high five, friend! Great write. Hope you are feeling great and your New Year is off to a happenin' start!!

M.I.A . January 21, 2012 at 1:49 AM congrats again for your win. A great poem rich with sensitivity that only you can bring ;)

Harry Horsman January 20, 2012 at 2:11 PM wonderful winner Michael, debbie could like this in her meter contest. harry

James Peranteau January 20, 2012 at 8:11 AM Awesome write dear poet ! I love this ! Going to mine favz of course ! Have a wonderful weekend Michael....much love, james

Cory Long January 18, 2012 at 12:26 PM congrats on your first place win with this gem.. cory

Dinda Minardi January 17, 2012 at 10:21 AM This is simple and amazing, Michael. Wonderfully written :) Big congrats to you!!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 17, 2012 at 9:45 AM congrats Michael luv on first place win for an amazing write my White Knight..luv..

Lizzie Treetop January 17, 2012 at 5:32 AM Delightful piece delightful thought gathering a rainbow and putting it back in place. We need more Rainbow fixers in life Michael! Hugs Lizzie

Kelly Zakerski January 17, 2012 at 3:27 AM Great write - congratulations on your win

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 17, 2012 at 2:47 AM Ah like this one, congratulations Michael x

Robert Pettit January 16, 2012 at 11:55 PM A very fanciful and delightful write. I like to see rainbows, especially when I can see the full arc.

Poet Destroyer A January 16, 2012 at 11:46 PM can you... feel the tears for one my friend... i see rainbows cry..only when i'm in trouble... how ever Michael, i always have the colors stand by my soul...love your poem..always yours trully...p.d.

Bob Quigley January 16, 2012 at 9:14 PM Congratulations Michael

Tracy Edwards January 16, 2012 at 5:27 PM beautiful Michael xxx

Lizanne Scholtz January 16, 2012 at 5:07 PM Love this one Michael, Congratulations on your win. Elizabeth

Andrea Dietrich January 16, 2012 at 4:25 PM this beauty looks so familiar to me but I didn't see my comment below. anyway, Congratulations. I LOVE it.

Andrew Crisci January 16, 2012 at 4:17 PM Congratulations on your big win, Michael in Brian's contest, " Any Form, Any Theme " I have enjoyed reading your well-written poem.... a poem filled with imagination and curiosity. Enjoy another victory. God bless and have a wonderful Tuesday. Love, Andrew.

Gwendolen Song January 16, 2012 at 4:06 PM The concept behind this rainbow write is divine! Picturing a rainbow being sad and then weeping its beauty into a large puddle in the street is childlike imagination. Such a refreshing write, Michael. I think it hit my heart more than anything I've read today! Gwendolen

Carol Sunshine Brown January 16, 2012 at 10:50 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Any Form/Theme" contest Michael. Love, Carol

David Williams January 16, 2012 at 10:38 AM Michael congrats on your very fine win, for a magical poem, loved it..David

Bl Devnath January 16, 2012 at 10:21 AM Congrats on your superb win, bl

Russell Sivey January 15, 2012 at 3:44 PM Very very awesome write here Michael! I really enjoyed reading your poem this evening! Wow, a crying rainbow! How did you ever come up with such a fine idea? I love it! You have a way with words, great descriptions! Excellent Work!!

Kim Merryman January 15, 2012 at 2:08 PM Enjoyed your whimsical poem, Michael. Love, Kim

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