A Rainbow Incensed

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I like faint fire I feel
fueling me with fervor
for far off places without you

I like sweet scent of spring I smell
when you fan the flames
ignited by your carefree hand

I like warmth seeping in
letting my blood course free
with unpredictable energy

I like refreshing air I breathe
just seeing freedom lay waiting me -
sole initiator of breezy times

I like option one and two 
of the whole shebang of things
I am free to do, or not do

I like how instant choice to vent
is mine, though time after time
... I've crossed no line ...

I like solitary silence
taking me by the hand
Soothing aches you've unhand

I like Creator's time
so packed with magic
My sole therapeutic fix.

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Lara Wash

Date: 5/31/2016 4:42:00 PM

Hi Iris, I like your poem and I gravitate to: "I like option one and two" because like you I am free to do or not do

Jan Allison

Date: 5/29/2016 5:17:00 PM

I like solitary silence too it is often at these times I write I particularly like the 6th stanza:-) hugs Jan xx

Len Gasun

Date: 5/15/2016 3:16:00 AM

Wonderful piece my dear friend, Iris. I enjoyed every line. Thanks a lot for sharing! love lots and hug, Galeo