A Rain Washed Red Rose

One red rose stays blushing in my garden
I caught a glimpse of it in the early dawn 
On the carpet of green, as a lovely dame it does sway
Flashing hues of contrast on a dull monsoon day

A flower with petals of such delicate contours
Yet sheltered by sharp stinging thorns that pierce 
Rain drops dripping off its soft ruddy face
As blood rushing from a wound’s open surface 

Fairer far than anything, one can envision
Its petals, woven and spun by angels of heaven
Oh symbol of grace, you rock me in delight,
And in me a thousand poetic fancies ignite!

Placed Second 
Nov. 17, 2021
The Rose Poem Contest
Sponsor- Robert James Liguori
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Date: 9/14/2025 9:50:00 AM
Just gorgeous imagery Loved reading this. It was sensual and very touching Thanks for Sharing Kind regards Gabby
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Date: 11/17/2021 6:19:00 PM
The exultation at the end is delightful! Congratulations, Valsa!
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Valsa George
Date: 11/19/2021 2:21:00 AM
Thanks a lot Kim. Glad I could come second in the contest. Congratulations to you once again on your first place !
Date: 11/16/2021 6:16:00 PM
Valsa such a lovely poem! Debx
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Valsa George
Date: 11/19/2021 2:18:00 AM
Thanks once more dear Deb !
Date: 11/15/2021 4:49:00 AM
A lovely poem, Valsa:)
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Valsa George
Date: 11/19/2021 2:18:00 AM
Very many thanks Jo.... !
Date: 11/13/2021 9:44:00 PM
What a beautiful way to view a rose so poetically! Lovely. Debx
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Date: 11/19/2021 2:17:00 AM
Thanks a lot Deb.... ! Glad you liked it !
Date: 11/13/2021 6:53:00 PM
Such a grand, yet delicate, tribute to the staying power of a beautiful rose. Bravo, Valsa! Perfume and Flowers, Gershon
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Valsa George
Date: 11/13/2021 8:31:00 PM
Is it grand....? If you feel so, I am so happy ! Onething I have learned by now.... you are witty, encouraging and affable....! Stay blessed Gershon !
Date: 11/13/2021 2:33:00 PM
wow to this portrait of a rose. You're imagery is splendid. I really enjoyed this piece. Thank you, Nancy
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Date: 11/13/2021 11:01:00 AM
A beautiful gem of a poem, with imagery that titillates.
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Valsa George
Date: 11/13/2021 8:24:00 PM
I am humbled ! Thank you so much Evelyn !
Date: 11/13/2021 10:22:00 AM
absolutely gorgeous, Valsa!
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Valsa George
Date: 11/13/2021 8:23:00 PM
Much appreciated. Thanks a lot Andrea !
Date: 11/13/2021 9:12:00 AM
Dear Valsa, a lovely vision of beauty and grace~ "And in me a thousand poetic fancies ignite"....great line!!! Blessings, Paulette
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Valsa George
Date: 11/13/2021 8:22:00 PM
I love the name Paulette. With this comment, you have begun blooming in my mind as a red red rose. Thank you dear poet friend!
Date: 11/13/2021 5:53:00 AM
A poem, beautiful like a rose. Wonderfully spun in cheerful words, Valsa.
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Date: 11/13/2021 6:39:00 PM
A pleasure to have got your comment ! Much grateful Vijay !
Date: 11/13/2021 5:50:00 AM
A symbol of grace. What better way to describe a rose. Beautiful.
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Valsa George
Date: 11/13/2021 6:37:00 PM
Thanks a lot Victor for your great appreciation.
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