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Ashen dove fades in vines ripple zephyr~mist met by sun sequoia.
Checked by: howmanysyllables.com: 17 syllables Written: February 15, 2023 A Ripple To Me Poetry Contest Sponsored by: JCB Brul

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Date: 2/20/2023 3:26:00 PM
Lovely one. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/18/2023 9:01:00 PM
Great monoku. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/18/2023 2:38:00 PM
Beautiful, beautiful, Lasaad! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/17/2023 7:54:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 2/17/2023 7:40:00 PM
Back to your poem with Congratulations on your sweet haiku . It really deserves this first place win.
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Date: 2/17/2023 1:00:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Have a great day/weekend...............
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Date: 2/17/2023 9:23:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Las -
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Date: 2/17/2023 9:15:00 AM
Lasaad, so descriptive, rich imagery! Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
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Date: 2/17/2023 7:12:00 AM
Lasaad, you have made excellent use of your syllables in this vividly descriptive monoku. Janice
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Date: 2/16/2023 1:44:00 PM
Reads like a good contender to me for JCB's contest. Way to go. Creative way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 2/16/2023 12:56:00 PM
Beautiful in word and imagery!
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Date: 2/16/2023 12:47:00 PM
A beautiful write/picture. Good Luck. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Date: 2/16/2023 1:34:00 AM
This sent a ripple to my heart.
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Date: 2/15/2023 9:45:00 PM
Great imagery, Sotto:)
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Date: 2/15/2023 9:14:00 PM
Strikingly beautiful ....! 'Mist met by sun sequoia'.... love it !
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Date: 2/15/2023 9:05:00 PM
Gorgeous images! :)
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Date: 2/15/2023 8:11:00 PM
Very descriptive, should do well~
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Date: 2/15/2023 6:13:00 PM
Simply beautiful Lasaad! Debx
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