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A Quiver In My Mind

Ashen dove fades in vines ripple zephyr~mist met by sun sequoia.

Checked by: howmanysyllables.com: 17 syllables 

Written: February 15, 2023

A Ripple To Me Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: JCB Brul

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Andrea Dietrich February 20, 2023 at 3:26 PM Lovely one. Congratulations.

Christuraj Alex February 18, 2023 at 9:01 PM Great monoku. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Ann Peck February 18, 2023 at 2:38 PM Beautiful, beautiful, Lasaad! Congratulations!

Beata Agustin February 17, 2023 at 7:54 PM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Valsa George February 17, 2023 at 7:40 PM Back to your poem with Congratulations on your sweet haiku . It really deserves this first place win.

Paula Goldsmith February 17, 2023 at 1:00 PM Back with Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Have a great day/weekend...............

Anne-Lise Andresen February 17, 2023 at 9:23 AM - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Las -

Sam Kauffman February 17, 2023 at 9:15 AM Lasaad, so descriptive, rich imagery! Congratulations on your win! Blessings.

Janice Canerdy February 17, 2023 at 7:12 AM Lasaad, you have made excellent use of your syllables in this vividly descriptive monoku. Janice

Sara Kendrick February 16, 2023 at 1:44 PM Reads like a good contender to me for JCB's contest. Way to go. Creative way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues February 16, 2023 at 12:56 PM Beautiful in word and imagery!

Paula Goldsmith February 16, 2023 at 12:47 PM A beautiful write/picture. Good Luck. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Victor Buhagiar February 16, 2023 at 1:34 AM This sent a ripple to my heart.

Joanna Daniel February 15, 2023 at 9:45 PM Great imagery, Sotto:)

Valsa George February 15, 2023 at 9:14 PM Strikingly beautiful ....! 'Mist met by sun sequoia'.... love it !

Evelyn Judy Buehler February 15, 2023 at 9:05 PM Gorgeous images! :)

Michelle Faulkner February 15, 2023 at 8:11 PM Very descriptive, should do well~

Deb M February 15, 2023 at 6:13 PM Simply beautiful Lasaad! Debx