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A Quintain About a Fall Poem

Autumn Fire

About the time August loses ardor – melting into her – she awakens!
Unabashed is she, Autumn’s uncommon goddess, unfolding herself for all to see.
Thrilling to wind’s tempting tempo, she flutters, touching the twilight tangerine.
Unflaggingly, she undulates radiance through trees before their final undressing.
Moved by a mysterious melody, she meanders in meadows and in mists.
Nuances of feelings come to us when we hear its sometimes melancholy notes.

Filling with fall fever, she fuses sky with terrain, flashing flames of persimmon.
Infatuated with her own imagination, she has ignited the world in iridescence. 
Red, russet, and gold enrich our world; we behold her ravishing array of artistry.
Exquisite is her passion as she enraptures us. Everlastingly may she reign!

A Quintain About a Fall Poem A contest that I got N/A in had inspired me to write a new acrostic, and I did not want to stall. Personifying autumn, I used some imagery to portray the splendid beauty of fiery fall. Of my last month’s poems, I felt it was the best one of them all. Poem #1: N/A poem in the Autumn Fire Contest posted & judged 10/27/16 Reposted 11/18/16 for Broken Wing's Take The Dagger From My Heart, Please - 3 (NA's from September, October, November 2016 Contests)Poetry Contest
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Nusker Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 12:18 PM
A work of art. Congrats on your win with this fabulous poem, Andrea. A 7 & a fav.
Lawless Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 9:49 PM
yada, yada...YAHOO.....Andrea, this flowed as easily as the leaves floating on the fall breeze. Beautifully done.
La France Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 8:45 AM
Andrea, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this amazing Acrostic, I really like it, and what a lovely image you have selected to go with your words, well done ~
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December 7, 2016 at 7:52 PM
Wonderful, Andrea. I love what you did with the alliterations. Congrats on your win. Agnes
Roper Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 5:08 PM
This is wonderful, Andrea, congratulations on this beautiful scene Hugs Eve
Martin Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 3:20 PM
Surprised about the original N/A - I don't feel so bad about my own now! Well deserved win! :-)
Smith Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 12:48 PM
I liked it the last time, congratulations again...
White Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 11:28 AM
Beautiful, those colors, and wonderful acrostic
White Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 11:29 AM
Congratulations
Callus Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 3:33 PM
Beautiful, Andrea! Imagery and passion set this poem on fire!!! // paul
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November 20, 2016 at 8:07 AM
Yes autumn's artistry can be fantastic. The colors are simply remarkable. I look forward to this period every year. We planted a row of Japanese maple trees, and the red they become at this time is a miracle.
Vaso Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 10:28 PM
Hi Andrea, I really enjoyed this poem! hugs!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 3:06 PM
This is really lovely Andrea The NAs happen to the best of poems. Love the picture too. 7 ; )
Roper Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 2:01 PM
love the poem , Andrea, soup mail....Hugs
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November 19, 2016 at 10:26 AM
In a world that Trump becomes president nothing would surprise me any longer dear Andrea! I never participate in contests. I write for the love of writing and for to help in any way I can! N/A ? Your poem? Well, already have said what I wanted to say! A wonderful Acrostic my friend!
Daniel Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 8:28 AM
This is a lovely acrostic well worth winning, Andrea:) N/A's come and go, don't bother, I try not to:) I'm sure it will win this time around:)
May Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 5:32 AM
A great acrostic and quintain Andrea ...I never made the list either...
P  Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 5:09 AM
Your imagery is superb Andrea, N/A poo, nonsense! :) This is top-rate in my book. 7+
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November 18, 2016 at 11:41 PM
I remember this beauty!! Can't believe you got an N/A...YOU...ANDREA! It's beautiful, dear. That's why I don't join too many contests. Hugs to you
Dietrich Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 8:49 PM
you are probably much wiser than me, sweetie. I am feeling really down lately about some of the contests!
Gupta Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 10:50 PM
Beautiful sigts and sounds in colourful personification ... a joy to read ... great work ...
Green Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 8:15 PM
This was absolutely gorgeous Andrea. You are very talented. This poem I could feel all the way to my core. This was amazing.
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November 18, 2016 at 7:02 PM
Your poems are always so wonderful to read. We are just now seeing yellowing leaves, though leaves have been falling. I hope we'll be seeing the scarlets, rusts, and golds in a week or so.
Walker Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 6:49 PM
Master of imagery my dear sis. Beautifully worded.
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