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A Quiet Voice

Caress 
With breathy voice
Undress

Your kiss
Upon my mind
Is bliss

Take all
Upon your bed
I fall


For Nette's Whispers of a Muse contest
By Richard Lamoureux
Written November 26th

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 12/8/2014 8:00:00 AM Coming back to congratulate you, Richard! The most romantic breath on the list by far...thanks for your comments on my son's page. He is thrilled by the attention and I'm sure he'll be wanting to write more...have a blessed day. Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/8/2014 8:17:00 AM It is so great to start writing young. It is good to cultivate expression of emotion from an early age.

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 12/6/2014 11:37:00 PM A fav Richard,congrats on the win...huggs Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/4/2014 7:14:00 PM wowowow, best romantic one i have seen yet. Congrats. I would have put this one in top three!! Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 12/4/2014 4:26:00 AM Wonderful Richard! Congrats on fine win! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/4/2014 7:23:00 AM Thanks Upma.

Maurice Yvonne Date: 12/3/2014 5:57:00 PM I love this Richard! For me this is a fav. Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/4/2014 7:24:00 AM Thanks Maurice.

Sandra Haight Date: 12/3/2014 3:10:00 PM Very nice, Richard! Congratulations on your win! Sandra Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/4/2014 7:24:00 AM Thankyou Sandra.

Paul Callus Date: 12/3/2014 10:44:00 AM Back with congratulations, Richard; a very deserved win! // paul Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/4/2014 7:26:00 AM Thanks Paul, I appreciate you coming back.

Nette Onclaud Date: 12/3/2014 10:23:00 AM passion with such distinction, rich... you delight..thanks for being part of my contest with shining congrats! Login to Reply

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 12/3/2014 9:39:00 AM Dropping back with my congratulations Richard. I'm glad to see this on the winning list. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/4/2014 7:27:00 AM Thanks Brenda.

Jan Allison Date: 12/3/2014 9:31:00 AM Dropping back with my congrats Richard:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/4/2014 7:29:00 AM Thanks Jan. hugs back to you.

Donna Jones Date: 12/2/2014 8:05:00 AM Wow....she'll love it..:-) ...nice! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/2/2014 8:27:00 AM I hope so Donna. Thanks.

Monterey Sirak Date: 12/2/2014 6:35:00 AM Once again you have created something magical with a new form! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/2/2014 8:28:00 AM ;0) thanks Monterey.

Nirode Ray Date: 11/28/2014 6:01:00 PM I loved it. Great poetry! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/30/2014 4:36:00 PM Thanks Ray.

Arthur Vaso Date: 11/28/2014 3:57:00 PM I have to agree whole heartily, you nailed it! What a seductive write you have created!! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/28/2014 4:12:00 PM Thanks again Arthur.

Liam Mcdaid Date: 11/28/2014 1:14:00 PM you drew this with style richard excellent pen pal Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/28/2014 4:12:00 PM Thanks Liam.

Leon Enriquez Date: 11/27/2014 4:46:00 PM Dear Richard: Enjoyed this poem. There's definitely a touch of muse! All the best, Leon. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/28/2014 4:18:00 PM Thanks Leon.

Paul Callus Date: 11/27/2014 2:35:00 PM Hmmm quite seductive, Richard! You've been raising the bar here! gl in contest. // paul Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/28/2014 4:19:00 PM You are kind Paul.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 11/26/2014 7:22:00 PM Wow, some passionate words! This is a difficult form...you have made it look easy, Richard. Have a blessed Thanksgiving...hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/27/2014 7:18:00 AM Thanks Rhonda. You as well, hugs Richard.

Eve Roper Date: 11/26/2014 6:24:00 PM Richard, "A quiet voice" good, :) eve 7 Have a wonderful Thanksgiving and a blessed day eve Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/27/2014 7:19:00 AM Thanks Eve, much appreciated.

Jan Allison Date: 11/26/2014 6:18:00 PM Its a VERY challenging form Richard - you have nailed it my friend - stunning write - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xxx Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/27/2014 7:20:00 AM You are Kind Jan. hugs back.

Eileen Manassian Date: 11/26/2014 1:25:00 PM GRRRRRR.....I'm working on some, but...I'm not getting anywhere. It's harder than I thought. I LOVE this. My money is on you for this one, Richard. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/26/2014 6:05:00 PM It's hard to imagine that it would be difficult but it is.

Tim Smith Date: 11/26/2014 1:21:00 PM You captured a moment splendidly...Tim Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/26/2014 6:05:00 PM Thanks Tim.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 11/26/2014 10:31:00 AM Wow passion alive wid such few words Richard! It's not as simple as it seems to be I know! I don't hv a clue on this as yet! Gl in contest! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/26/2014 6:08:00 PM Thanks for the luck Upma.

David Meade Date: 11/26/2014 10:00:00 AM I am giving this to my wife -- right now!! Awesome job my friend -- Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/26/2014 10:02:00 AM You made me smile, I'm glad you are putting it to good use *lol*.

Barbara Gorelick Date: 11/26/2014 9:49:00 AM This seems perfect to me. I sat down to write thinking this was going to be simple..its not! Just beautiful. BG Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/26/2014 10:03:00 AM I struggled coming up with a Coherant conclusion. Thanks for the kind comment.

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