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A Quiet Voice

Caress 
With breathy voice
Undress

Your kiss
Upon my mind
Is bliss

Take all
Upon your bed
I fall


For Nette's Whispers of a Muse contest
By Richard Lamoureux
Written November 26th

Copyright © Richard Lamoureux | Year Posted 2014

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

December 8, 2014 at 8:00 AM

Coming back to congratulate you, Richard! The most romantic breath on the list by far...thanks for your comments on my son's page. He is thrilled by the attention and I'm sure he'll be wanting to write more...have a blessed day. Hugs, Rhonda

Richard Lamoureux

December 8, 2014 at 8:17 AM

It is so great to start writing young. It is good to cultivate expression of emotion from an early age.

December 6, 2014 at 11:37 PM

A fav Richard,congrats on the win...huggs

Andrea Dietrich

December 4, 2014 at 7:14 PM

wowowow, best romantic one i have seen yet. Congrats. I would have put this one in top three!!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

December 4, 2014 at 4:26 AM

Wonderful Richard! Congrats on fine win!

Richard Lamoureux

December 4, 2014 at 7:23 AM

Thanks Upma.

December 3, 2014 at 5:57 PM

I love this Richard! For me this is a fav. Congratulations on your win.

Richard Lamoureux

December 4, 2014 at 7:24 AM

Thanks Maurice.

December 3, 2014 at 3:10 PM

Very nice, Richard! Congratulations on your win! Sandra

Richard Lamoureux

December 4, 2014 at 7:24 AM

Thankyou Sandra.

December 3, 2014 at 10:44 AM

Back with congratulations, Richard; a very deserved win! // paul

Richard Lamoureux

December 4, 2014 at 7:26 AM

Thanks Paul, I appreciate you coming back.

December 3, 2014 at 10:23 AM

passion with such distinction, rich... you delight..thanks for being part of my contest with shining congrats!

Brenda Meier-Hans

December 3, 2014 at 9:39 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Richard. I'm glad to see this on the winning list.

Richard Lamoureux

December 4, 2014 at 7:27 AM

Thanks Brenda.

December 3, 2014 at 9:31 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Richard:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

December 4, 2014 at 7:29 AM

Thanks Jan. hugs back to you.

December 2, 2014 at 8:05 AM

Wow....she'll love it..:-) ...nice!

Richard Lamoureux

December 2, 2014 at 8:27 AM

I hope so Donna. Thanks.

December 2, 2014 at 6:35 AM

Once again you have created something magical with a new form!

Richard Lamoureux

December 2, 2014 at 8:28 AM

;0) thanks Monterey.

November 28, 2014 at 6:01 PM

I loved it. Great poetry!

Richard Lamoureux

November 30, 2014 at 4:36 PM

Thanks Ray.

November 28, 2014 at 3:57 PM

I have to agree whole heartily, you nailed it! What a seductive write you have created!!

Richard Lamoureux

November 28, 2014 at 4:12 PM

Thanks again Arthur.

November 28, 2014 at 1:14 PM

you drew this with style richard excellent pen pal

Richard Lamoureux

November 28, 2014 at 4:12 PM

Thanks Liam.

November 27, 2014 at 4:46 PM

Dear Richard: Enjoyed this poem. There's definitely a touch of muse! All the best, Leon.

Richard Lamoureux

November 28, 2014 at 4:18 PM

Thanks Leon.

November 27, 2014 at 2:35 PM

Hmmm quite seductive, Richard! You've been raising the bar here! gl in contest. // paul

Richard Lamoureux

November 28, 2014 at 4:19 PM

You are kind Paul.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

November 26, 2014 at 7:22 PM

Wow, some passionate words! This is a difficult form...you have made it look easy, Richard. Have a blessed Thanksgiving...hugs, Rhonda

Richard Lamoureux

November 27, 2014 at 7:18 AM

Thanks Rhonda. You as well, hugs Richard.

November 26, 2014 at 6:24 PM

Richard, "A quiet voice" good, :) eve 7 Have a wonderful Thanksgiving and a blessed day eve

Richard Lamoureux

November 27, 2014 at 7:19 AM

Thanks Eve, much appreciated.

November 26, 2014 at 6:18 PM

Its a VERY challenging form Richard - you have nailed it my friend - stunning write - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xxx

Richard Lamoureux

November 27, 2014 at 7:20 AM

You are Kind Jan. hugs back.

Eileen Manassian

November 26, 2014 at 1:25 PM

GRRRRRR.....I'm working on some, but...I'm not getting anywhere. It's harder than I thought. I LOVE this. My money is on you for this one, Richard.

Richard Lamoureux

November 26, 2014 at 6:05 PM

It's hard to imagine that it would be difficult but it is.

November 26, 2014 at 1:21 PM

You captured a moment splendidly...Tim

Richard Lamoureux

November 26, 2014 at 6:05 PM

Thanks Tim.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

November 26, 2014 at 10:31 AM

Wow passion alive wid such few words Richard! It's not as simple as it seems to be I know! I don't hv a clue on this as yet! Gl in contest!

Richard Lamoureux

November 26, 2014 at 6:08 PM

Thanks for the luck Upma.

November 26, 2014 at 10:00 AM

I am giving this to my wife -- right now!! Awesome job my friend --

Richard Lamoureux

November 26, 2014 at 10:02 AM

You made me smile, I'm glad you are putting it to good use *lol*.

Barbara Gorelick

November 26, 2014 at 9:49 AM

This seems perfect to me. I sat down to write thinking this was going to be simple..its not! Just beautiful. BG

Richard Lamoureux

November 26, 2014 at 10:03 AM

I struggled coming up with a Coherant conclusion. Thanks for the kind comment.

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