A Quiet Place

Seasoned eyes, see both the past and present.
Bookended between times now out of mind.
A tattered soul recalls a steep ascent.
Experiences; a life intertwined.
Understand that time cares not, how it’s spent. 

All the times, those of good and those of bad.
The highs and lows between love and sorrow.
What’s known of joy came from being sad.
Hearts rejoicing; in what is tomorrow.
Hope to come, dismisses all that was had. 

The toughest of paths; self-discovery, 
leads the wanderer to a quiet place.
Beneath, leaves and limbs, silence covers thee.
It’s here with himself; he comes face to face. 
No greater bliss than one’s recovery.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Miller Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 1:42 AM
Some fine lines in this excellent poem, congratulations on your placement
Dennison Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 10:15 PM
Thank you
Bueckert Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 2:12 PM
Excellent write, I really liked "time cares not how it's spent". Congrats on a fantastic poem!
Dennison Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 10:15 PM
Thank you
Fowler Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 12:18 PM
I like the same line as Jeff, "What's known of joy came from being sad." Great writing Dill. :) Congratulations on your win!
Dennison Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 10:14 PM
Thank you
Logan Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 9:33 AM
I have a quiet place where I can be alone with my thoughts. It clears the cobwebs from the corners of my mind. Congratulations on your winning entry, Dill.
Dennison Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 10:14 PM
Thank you
Hankins Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 8:59 AM
Superb writing, Dill. Very deserving. I was so happy to see your poem rise to this level in my Quintain (Sicilian) contest. Congratulations!
Dennison Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 10:14 PM
Thank you!
Kyser Avatar
October 11, 2022 at 7:34 PM
"What's known of joy came from being sad" - write on. I connected with this poem completely.
Dennison Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 2:21 PM
I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading
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