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Quintain/English
An English Quintain is (five line stanzas with a rhyming pattern of a,b,a,b,b ), there is no specific meter or length of line.

When seeking a respite from the city, I turn to nature's calm and tranquil ways. And go to a lake that's beyond pretty, a quiet place to stay for a few days while I relax, soaking up the sun's rays. The primordial pulse of nature, for me, is felt in rugged places, still serene. There, I readjust my reality, finding places pristine, peaceful, and green; where nature cuts my strings and sets me free. A babbling brook mutes anxiety's voice, granting quietude to my troubled soul. Society and stress leave me no choice, life's like filling in a bottomless hole with little hope of ever feeling whole. I love hiking through the old-growth forests, surrounded by tall, centuries-old trees. There, nature needs no gardeners or florists and I get to shout as loud as I please, communicating with the birds and bees. (Quintain/English) 5/13/2021 01/29/23 Finding Peace Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Regina McIntosh

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Date: 2/8/2023 10:07:00 AM
Just filled with sheer delight, Emile! Nature indeed is a balm for the tattered soul! Congratulations! Blessings of forest calm to you my friend.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/8/2023 10:27:00 AM
Thanks, Sam, your comments are most welcome and appreciated, my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/5/2023 4:05:00 AM
Just love this, friend. It's a beauty and a joy to read. Wonderful win. Congratulations and God bless you always, love, Gina
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/5/2023 8:35:00 AM
Thanks, Regina, I appreciate your comments and the placement, my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/25/2021 3:37:00 AM
Emile, well done and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Calm-Challenge with your beautiful poem, I like your image too, peace _Constance
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/25/2021 6:26:00 AM
Thanks Constance, your comments and a win are always appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/23/2021 10:26:00 AM
I feel a sense of peace and tranquility reading your vivid description Emile, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/23/2021 1:15:00 PM
Thanks Jan, your comments are most appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/22/2021 10:09:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/23/2021 6:22:00 AM
Thanks, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/13/2021 1:20:00 PM
Expressive writing, Emile. I thoroughly enjoyed reading about your venturing into the stillness of a quiet place where it is so meaningful to communicate with nature... where you shout out loud as you please. Nice!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/22/2021 6:47:00 PM
Back to say Congratulations on your win!!!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/13/2021 2:23:00 PM
Thanks Milt, you are very generous with your time and compliments, and I appreciate both my friend, Emile.

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