A Quiet Place

When seeking a respite from the city, I turn to Nature's calm and tranquil ways. And go to a lake that's beyond pretty, a quiet place to camp for a few days while I relax, soaking up the sun's rays. For the primal pulse of Nature, for me, beats in the rugged mountains: still serene. There, I readjust my reality, to fit places, pristine, peaceful, and green; where Nature cuts my strings and sets me free. A babbling brook mutes anxiety's voice, granting quietude to my troubled soul. City life is a necessary choice: yet it's like I'm in a bottomless hole, with little hope of ever feeling whole. I love hiking in the old-growth forests, surrounded by tall, centuries-old trees. Nature needs no gardeners or florists: and I get to shout as loud as I please, communicating with the birds and bees.
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Kauffman Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 10:07 AM
Just filled with sheer delight, Emile! Nature indeed is a balm for the tattered soul! Congratulations! Blessings of forest calm to you my friend.
Pinet Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 10:27 AM
Thanks, Sam, your comments are most welcome and appreciated, my friend, Emile.
Mcintosh Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 4:05 AM
Just love this, friend. It's a beauty and a joy to read. Wonderful win. Congratulations and God bless you always, love, Gina
Pinet Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 8:35 AM
Thanks, Regina, I appreciate your comments and the placement, my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 3:37 AM
Emile, well done and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Calm-Challenge with your beautiful poem, I like your image too, peace _Constance
Pinet Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 6:26 AM
Thanks Constance, your comments and a win are always appreciated my friend, Emile.
Allison Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 10:26 AM
I feel a sense of peace and tranquility reading your vivid description Emile, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Pinet Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 1:15 PM
Thanks Jan, your comments are most appreciated my friend, Emile.
Alex Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 10:09 PM
Congratulations!
Pinet Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 6:22 AM
Thanks, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Hankins Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 1:20 PM
Expressive writing, Emile. I thoroughly enjoyed reading about your venturing into the stillness of a quiet place where it is so meaningful to communicate with nature... where you shout out loud as you please. Nice!
Hankins Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 6:47 PM
Back to say Congratulations on your win!!!
Pinet Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 2:23 PM
Thanks Milt, you are very generous with your time and compliments, and I appreciate both my friend, Emile.
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