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A Quickie

bubbles rise to the surface like little cocoons of hope they strike the velvet surface and merge with the air exploding another dream Barbara Gorelick 6/19/14

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/5/2014 8:51:00 PM

you did superbly with the picture given us. I see some of the top winners truly wrote of "quickies" hmmm, how was I to know that would have been ok? haha

John Lawless

Date: 12/3/2014 10:18:00 PM

Lovely verse here Barbara. Very interesting take on the theme

Jan Allison

Date: 12/2/2014 1:24:00 AM

beautiful imagery Barbara - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 6/30/2014 12:47:00 AM

Neat brevity here, Barbara. I like the fantasy with the personification of the bubbles. Best of luck, I give it a 10/10.

David Mohn

Date: 6/25/2014 7:51:00 PM

Love this Barbara...thanks for your comment on mine as well...good luck

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/23/2014 7:23:00 AM

Ahh!! Enjoyed reading this creative Free Verse..I can just see the dreams..Thanks for the visit to my Garden Party..Sara

Robert Johnson

Date: 6/22/2014 8:57:00 PM

And when the bubble bursts, the depths of all hope erupts unto the heavens where dreams come true.

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/21/2014 9:04:00 AM

"exploding another dream", a fantastic concept and a wonderful write my friend!! Good luck in the contest and BBBBBRAVOOOO!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2014 10:51:00 PM

I just LOVE how you did yours. So succinct and with such a great little theme

Noelle Devereau

Date: 6/19/2014 6:11:00 PM

Very nice write...enjoyed especially when they merge with the air...Noelle

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/19/2014 3:09:00 PM

Dear Barbar, I love the way you see "little cocoons of hope" in the bubbles. What a pity they end up "exploding another dream," but life is like that. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn