A Queen's Love

A Queens’s love

Thick palace walls where lichen grows,
And battlements in deep dark shade,
Watch o’er the lady in the tower.

 Although her heart already knows,
She keeps the vow that she has made
And sits alone within her bower.

As sunset hues of golden glows.
And shadows fall in daylight fade
The queen mourns for her forest flower*.

On Flodden field his life blood flows.
Her king the final price has paid.
His body broken, battle ower*.

His life, the king, gave for his cause
The truest king that ever was.



4stanzas x3 lines and a couplet. abc abc abc abc dd 

James1V—Married Margaret, sister of Henry V111of England
Queen Margaret’s bower, where she sat, can still be seen at Linlithgow palace.

•	Ower----Scot’s tongue for over.
•	The Flowers of the Forest---by Jean Elliot, a song of lament for the men who died at 
Flodden
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
May 10, 2010 at 11:20 AM
interesting work, and historical work, enjoyed!!
Owens Avatar
May 9, 2010 at 2:07 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem...thanks for comments on the Limerick...the guy who netted the emu was experienced with them and tied his feet...Thanks for congrats...Marty
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2010 at 10:43 AM
Ps I love Meyer's performance. Do you think it is accurate? He is a very handsome man and I heard King Henry was handsome before he became such a huge glutton. Is Meyers very famous there in Autstralia? Wish I could see more of your poems. but I'm making myself late for church and still so many comments to return. . .. Luv, andrea
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2010 at 10:39 AM
Very romantic portrayal of a famous descendent of that "bastard" Henry. hahaha. I really like this, Margaret. I have to ask you, since you are from that area of the world. When I say Bloody Bastard, does it sound horrible to a British person, do you think? It's hard to know how they take that word over there. In America, bloody has no impact on us. Just curous how it sounds to the British ear. Happy Mother's Day. Now I have to get off of here!! Luv, andrea
Mehta Avatar
May 9, 2010 at 2:25 AM
A very deep study of the Royals
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