Notes About The Poem

this bit of fun was the result of a clip on the internet where this adoreable french-bull puppy refused the urging of his person to step through a wee-little puddle to get up on the curb.

A Puppy Named 'Pig' N a Puddle

Just a regular curbside puddle,
It really wasn't that big.
But it had the look of an ocean,
To a sweet little puppy named 'Pig.'

"Your paws might touch the water,
No chances that you will drown."
Pig looked at his master- all crazy,
And was frozen like ice to the ground.

"It's only a wee-bit of a puddle,
You'll easily make the grade."
But Pig wasn't ready to listen,
He stood there and was very afraid.

On a leash Pig's brand new owner,
Tried in vain to nicely persuade.
But Pig just wouldn't listen,
To pleas that his new person made.

Again -"it's only a little puddle,
You really won't get very wet.
You could see Pig was thinking,
"Wets wet! And I'm not ready yet."

"But the water is only a trickle,
If you try you'll see you can wade."
No matter all the sweet talking,
That pup just couldn't be swayed.

The pup felt a tug on the leash,
The water was coming too near.
So Pig started his squealing,
And squealing was all you could hear.

Discouraged -his person relented,
And lifted the scaredy-cat Pup.
He bypassed the wee little puddle,
And lost, by picking Pig up.

I wanted the end to be funny,
With a moral to find I could spin.
Yep, a guy with a pup he'd name 'Pig,'
Has a pup that is smarter than him.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Feren Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 8:06 PM
As a new member here, I must say your poem has stretched out a smile so wide! Great job!
Emmanuel Brown Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 11:40 AM
This is a great work, Nice and end well.
Baker Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 10:48 PM
Very well written, I do like the way you ended the poem, very creative piece
Sergi Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 4:45 PM
Very skillfully, written Margeret . Hopefully, He'll get his feet wet as an older dog! Welcome!
Eddy Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 2:10 PM
I honestly thought of an asabs fable....welcome and good job
Hagy Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 1:38 PM
This is so great Margaret!... such a cute write :) The ending is great!... I have seen too often how many animals have their people trained! :) Welcome to the Soup...best site for us poets! :)
Phalen Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 12:48 PM
I love this, I felt as though I was there watching
Buck Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 12:39 PM
Well done. Welcome to the soup. We will look forward to many more such works. Now I'm off to "Wade" through some more of your ink. Keep them coming. oldbuck
Mweetwa Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 11:41 AM
Nice and skillful. Good work
Gauthier Avatar
January 26, 2018 at 10:29 PM
Extremely witty, Margaret. A FAVE with me. Thank you.
Cole Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 5:43 AM
Very funny, well done
Wanter Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 6:15 PM
Really funny! I have two puddles right now on my driveway I've got to wash off because it was raining and she wouldn't go. Maybe that puddle wasn't so innocent after all!
Allison Avatar
May 19, 2017 at 1:40 PM
ha ha ha what a fun tale Margaret but what a silly name for a dog lol:-) hugs Jan xx7
Wade Avatar
May 21, 2017 at 10:44 PM
Thanks Jan- Like 'Pig" and his misgivings I've hesitated to put my toe into the public puddle of poetry until now. Just sorry I waited so long but glad I found poetry soup. The comments like yours have led me to authors work and the ability to get a list of Fav's. You top the list. lol Maggi
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