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A Puppy named 'Pig' N A Puddle

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this bit of fun was the result of a clip on the internet where this adoreable french-bull puppy refused the urging of his person to step through a wee-little puddle to get up on the curb.

Just a regular curbside puddle,
It really wasn't that big.
But it had the look of an ocean,
To a sweet little puppy named 'Pig.'

"Your paws might touch the water,
No chances that you will drown."
Pig looked at his master- all crazy,
And was frozen like ice to the ground.

"It's only a wee-bit of a puddle,
You'll easily make the grade."
But Pig wasn't ready to listen,
He stood there and was very afraid.

On a leash Pig's brand new owner,
Tried in vain to nicely persuade.
But Pig just wouldn't listen,
To pleas that his new person made.

Again -"it's only a little puddle,
You really won't get very wet.
You could see Pig was thinking,
"Wets wet! And I'm not ready yet."

"But the water is only a trickle,
If you try you'll see you can wade."
No matter all the sweet talking,
That pup just couldn't be swayed.

The pup felt a tug on the leash,
The water was coming too near.
So Pig started his squealing,
And squealing was all you could hear.

Discouraged -his person relented,
And lifted the scaredy-cat Pup.
He bypassed the wee little puddle,
And lost, by picking Pig up.

I wanted the end to be funny,
With a moral to find I could spin.
Yep, a guy with a pup he'd name 'Pig,'
Has a pup that is smarter than him.



Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/9/2018 11:40:00 AM
This is a great work, Nice and end well.
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Date: 6/7/2018 10:48:00 PM
Very well written, I do like the way you ended the poem, very creative piece
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Date: 6/7/2018 4:45:00 PM
Very skillfully, written Margeret . Hopefully, He'll get his feet wet as an older dog! Welcome!
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Date: 6/7/2018 2:10:00 PM
I honestly thought of an asabs fable....welcome and good job
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Date: 6/7/2018 1:38:00 PM
This is so great Margaret!... such a cute write :) The ending is great!... I have seen too often how many animals have their people trained! :) Welcome to the Soup...best site for us poets! :)
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Date: 6/7/2018 12:48:00 PM
I love this, I felt as though I was there watching
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Date: 6/7/2018 12:39:00 PM
Well done. Welcome to the soup. We will look forward to many more such works. Now I'm off to "Wade" through some more of your ink. Keep them coming. oldbuck
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Date: 6/7/2018 11:41:00 AM
Nice and skillful. Good work
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Date: 1/26/2018 10:29:00 PM
Extremely witty, Margaret. A FAVE with me. Thank you.
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Date: 1/21/2018 5:43:00 AM
Very funny, well done
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Date: 5/20/2017 6:15:00 PM
Really funny! I have two puddles right now on my driveway I've got to wash off because it was raining and she wouldn't go. Maybe that puddle wasn't so innocent after all!
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Date: 5/19/2017 1:40:00 PM
ha ha ha what a fun tale Margaret but what a silly name for a dog lol:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Margaret Wade
Date: 5/21/2017 10:44:00 PM
Thanks Jan- Like 'Pig" and his misgivings I've hesitated to put my toe into the public puddle of poetry until now. Just sorry I waited so long but glad I found poetry soup. The comments like yours have led me to authors work and the ability to get a list of Fav's. You top the list. lol Maggi