A Pupil's Progress a Phrasis
A PUPIL’S PROGRESS-a phrasis
Good work,a praiseworthy effort,
sadly exam nervousness held him
back .He can think quickly,albeit
sometimes not clearly, when he
thinks before he inks!
He grasps new ideas ,solves problems
logically,never flags, meeting
difficulties with enthusiasm;outstripping
others by steady application,rather than sheer
brilliance, such effort can cost him dear.
Mastering essentials ,he sets his bar,quickly
learning from his mistakes.He is responsible
and organised,always pleasant and courteous,
and thoughtful of others. In his own quiet
way, a born leader, a boy of character &
commonsense.We think highly of him.
You may listen to me read this structured prose phrasis on youtube under pen name ichthys
Copyright © Brian Strand | Year Posted 2013
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