A Puddle

When there is a torrential rain,
A puddle starts to form
And quickly turns into a lake,
Which shouldn’t be the norm.

Okay, I do exaggerate – 
It’s closer to a pond,
Yet it’s too deep to wade through
If you want to get beyond.

This giant puddle (mini-pond)
Is on my walking path
And though I shouldn’t be surprised,
It does incur my wrath.

So I must then retrace my steps
And go a different way,
Which is exactly what I did
When on my walk today.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 1/4/2024 6:36:00 PM
My goodness, it sounded like your feet stayed dry! Puddle is such a funny cute word. Such a cute poem.
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Date: 12/18/2023 6:06:00 PM
What a lovely poem Ilene. Life is filled with unexpected events.
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Date: 12/18/2023 3:07:00 PM
lovely story, tain, can change our day enjoyed
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Date: 12/18/2023 3:01:00 PM
I so love your rhyming tales of everyday situations, Ilene. If that happened to me, I doubt it would even occur to me poetise it. I can look in my head and see all kinds of oddball scenarios but rarely see the poetry in the seemingly innocuous. You do this so well that it has me telling myself to just damn well LOOK! Smashing.
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Date: 12/18/2023 12:43:00 PM
Ilene, this a fun snap shot of your life. btw check that 3rd stanza. Good read!
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 12/18/2023 1:51:00 PM
Thank you SO much, Dean! I despise typos but they sometimes sneak right by me. Much appreciated!
Date: 12/18/2023 12:37:00 PM
Hey Ilene….this poem made me smile! Fun…..Debx
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 12/18/2023 1:51:00 PM
Thank you, Deb!
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