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A Promontory Illusion

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The dream: I stroll my house to a promontory I stare out of the limitless, restless ocean stepping ahead, dived into the ravenous water something white was on the beach today I dug up many bones entrenched in the sand. Whispers became harsher to sever and wreck their nasty spirits as he greeted his eternal partners there was a swarm of slain people they shut an ailing slayer in the vortex of hate.
Written: November 07, 2022

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Date: 11/8/2022 7:59:00 AM
Fantastic picture, conjures up many thoughts of creation, the miraculous creation! Your second verse opens up and provokes my mind to think of mysterious sources of nasty spirits and the vortex of hate. Intriguing thoughts, Lasaad. Your poetry makes me think, and I think that is good. :-) Bill
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